There comes a day!


from the ABC set *{Terminate On Sight}2nd Album*

There comes day in your life when you want to kick back.
Straw hat,on the porch,when your old perhaps.
Want to gather your thoughts,think about wonders.
Grab a cold drink,and brag,to your grand kids.
How life is golden,just grab the little ones,and hold them.

So I will light a cigar in the master bedroom of my crib.
Pictures on the wall,medals too.
About every acheivement there,and everything I did.

Remince,about who you met in life,and who you haven't.
Thinking about the drinks an ladies you had.
And thinking,about the ones you still going to be having.
Makes your world go upside down,crack a smile.Start laughing.

Just think,if you collided with major names,could of made your carrer stop.
All down the drain,cause reprecussions that will make your temeperature go up.
Blazing hot.
Make you go off on a mad one,go and be a rebel.
Smoke that magic,what it called,what not.
No,nothe pot,that's it.
And everything else,I'm going to have it.

Think about the greed if your life,
The arguments,disputes with your wife.
Think about,the blood on the knife.
Think about the losses.
STRIKEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

There comes a day,when you going to kick back.
Think about,what a hell of a life.
You've had.
Make sure,it good.

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Comments

sarah wilson | June 7, 2009 - 10:54

I really like this. There's a flow to it which carried me along through the good the bad and the moral. Nice work:)

pinda | June 7, 2009 - 13:24

Glad you liked it Sarah.
Where you been?,Haven't seen you post on here for a while.

sarah wilson | June 7, 2009 - 18:35

Posted a week ago. I'm writing stuff but it doesn't feel good enough to post so I've been catching up on the reading. There's some great stuff on the site!!!
Keep up the good work!:)

threeleafshamrock | June 11, 2009 - 15:52

You say some good things in your work Pinda and tell a good story. Enjoyed this one too.

Chris ;)