Always rushing.
Times running out.
A constant worry,
hmm…a nagging doubt.
Doors open.
The passengers jostle.
I jump into train,
I hear a chuckle.
Train is speeding.
Destination as usual.
We all agree,
journey’s a gruel.
We settle ok.
The silence returns.
Everyone’s engrossed,
there are no concerns
My doubt returns.
I scream out “shit!”
I look at the map,
I feel like a twit.
Some heads turn.
Some have refused.
The chuckler grins,
very amused.

Comments
Cavalcaderl | August 6, 2010 - 21:55
New Pipmic
I liked this,I had a chuckle to.
Some heads turn.
Some have refused
The chuckler grins,
very amused.
Love it all,very polished
I am still learning? By other's
great works..
julie xx
PipMic | August 7, 2010 - 08:16
Thanks for your comment.... but its actually true or nearly so.
darkenwolf | August 12, 2010 - 17:43
i like the way you write! love it ;)
PipMic | August 13, 2010 - 13:10
thanks again
Kahdai | October 7, 2010 - 21:05
haha thats me too!