Winter of Discontent


from the ABC set 1 Viva Pathways

How I covet the stucco fronted lives;
soft lighting, desirable postcode
of those who had chances
and better parents. The acerbic brew
spilled from my cups
filled pages with resentments.
Could this admission
crack the sappy veneers
or prise open clenched fingers?

I hear a man speak of a power
softly, in a hundred abstract nouns.
he once held bitter
as my own caustic cannister
but his eyes now are freer.

So there is hope.
I pray for you
and pray to be you.

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Comments

lenchenelf | January 4, 2009 - 23:55

As yet, I've only touched on a few pieces from your back catalogue, but look forward to catching up.
No matter the cause, resentments lurk in most of us: having the honesty and fluidity to express yourself as yourself is a gift and it shows in your work. Thanks for sharing this L

chuck | January 5, 2009 - 00:12

For me that piece exudes honesty and self-knowledge.