It's not for you to bare
My pain,that life deputized
For me.Which stagnates into
Your present world and makes
It empty.Especially when
I am at halcyon now.
Such full of life roamed
Happily all over this land
And although we cannot share
The same path now, why should
Yours be marred with so much
Gloom.
So while I thank you
For your love and all
Your genuine tears,
Remember me, not just for
Today, but smiling in
Eternity.
And many months or years
Ahead when I slip from your
Memory, even for a short while.
Do not worry,for every ray
Of sunshine,is I, saying
I'm near!
Comments
Clive-Pearson | March 16, 2012 - 10:06
Wow I don't usually comment on poetry one because I don't really know enough about it, and two because I don't write that much off it. But got to say I loved this poem, it is so the type of thing you would expect a real love to say, thank you Rose great piece.
Prettyrose | March 25, 2012 - 02:47
Hi Clive :0 sorry just saw your lovely and very appreciated comment, which means a lot too me :)
Thank you for classing my work as poetry, some would say its not he he but I write from the heart, and sadly life and others, ups and downs, amongst non-fiction.
Your welcome and so glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you again
Keep writing
Keep Smiling :)