or had I?
“Wrong pin – Try again”
Bewilderment.
“Wrong pin – Try again”
Bafflement!
Confusion of brain?
Card withdrawal
in case it’s consumed,
or they swallow, block it, lock it.
Concerned,
‘my pin’s not hard … ??’
back in pocket,
to its wallet returned –
astonishment!
‘Wrong card!’
– Try again!!
Comments
andrea | February 3, 2012 - 22:26
Hahaha - I know the feeling!
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Silver Spun Sand | February 4, 2012 - 09:08
Me too;-) Nice one Rhiannon.
Tina
Rhiannonw | February 4, 2012 - 09:19
Thanks, — glad you both enjoyed it! regards, Rhiannon
gerardineanne | February 4, 2012 - 09:53
Exactly how it feels!
Rhiannonw | February 4, 2012 - 12:48
Thanks for saying so! regards, Rhiannon
steve_elliott04 | February 6, 2012 - 21:50
'or they swallow, block it, lock it', i love it. Very relatable for almost every reader, im sure. Nicely done!
Stephen
Rhiannonw | February 6, 2012 - 21:53
Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoyed it! It was fun writing it. Rhiannon
Silver Spun Sand | February 10, 2012 - 15:23
Gosh - this is is always happening to me. Brilliant, Rhiannon...sorry this is so late, but I only just happened by it. Better late than never, most certainly;-)
Tina
Rhiannonw | February 10, 2012 - 15:29
Glad you enjoyed it, Tina! It was a bit of fun (and actually was from an incident my husband confessed to me ruefully. He is not one to forget his pin, and he really was baffled!)
regards, Rhiannon