As a crow watches
in agony, I am a flick
of a cigarette
all is at an end, no
job, no hope, but then
who am I to judge?
Is it really that bad?
No, not really.
There are friends who
care, yes there are.
And I do have friends
I know I have…
Where‘s the telephone?
© Richard L. Provencher
Comments
scratch | December 31, 2011 - 12:31
Very different from your other contributions Richard. Still a nature reference in there- and does it work? Undoubtedly. Very good writing.
Richard L. Prov... | December 31, 2011 - 17:36
Hello Scratch, glad you liked this one. I have so many writing thoughts running through my head constantly. It's great. And I do try various directions and watch how my words evolve on paper. I just love to write, in fact even more now, as I meander into my 70th year of life. Best wishes and a Happy New Year, from Richard LP & Esther.
scratch | December 31, 2011 - 18:43
And the very best to you and yours Richard, may your pen continue to flow freely!