THE KITE poem


from the ABC set POETRY - A Passage of Motion 1

The Kite

waves of air
catch
the fragile paper
launched by
a ten year old
boy’s hand
the wood slim and
firm
rises up up

© Richard L. Provencher 1974

first published 1974
Polished Pebbles
A Bluewater Anthology
Seeker Publishing, Inc.
Sarnia, Ontario

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Comments

Nathan Bednarek | December 31, 2008 - 20:51

I wonder whether this poem is a description of kite-flying or whether it's a metaphor for something else- like the impulsive and inexperienced nature of young boys.

The poem is very effective either way, and it's a very enjoyable read.

Well done.

Nathan.