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Lateness of Light

Posted by Richard L. Prov... on April 9, 2011 - 18:37
from the ABC set POETRY - A Passage of Motion 2

Clouds lay in colour
one blends upon another

burnished pines serene
among rocky ridges

outcrop of silence –-
a wilderness domain.

The tundra witness
to each sunset

from red to yellow tinge
and early light to dim:

now colour it black.

© Richard L. Provencher

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insertponceyfre... | April 9, 2011 - 19:31

I like this very much Richard. One thing - in line 2, you didn't mean blends did you?

Richard L. Prov... | April 9, 2011 - 23:02

Thank you for your observation. I do believe your suggestion is more in tune with the flow of words. Thanks again. RLP

Yutka | April 10, 2011 - 08:33

love this, Richard. A whole kaleidoscope of colours and feelings