As I glided in through the outer atmosphere, it struck me how long I’d been away from Earth – and why I left it behind in the first place. The old pollution lingering in the higher spaces still smelled like the last breaths of a dying planet and, drifting down a little further, I could see the scorch marks of the wars that tore it apart long before I was born.
Back then, humanity had greeted the angeli as saviours in desperate times. It was said that they came from the sun and we were only too willing to call them ‘angels’. But my grandfather knew better and, because of that, my family have been hunted as terrorists for as long as I can remember.
Making for the northern forests, I reached the old temple just as a brown dusk was falling. Many millennia ago the building had been set up to represent unity between earth and sky. How it survived the ensuing destruction I’ve no idea but my grandfather had often taken me there to remind me of our potential, and it seemed an appropriate place to slide into shadow and wait for Lily.
A wolf howled in the distance.

Comments
insertponceyfre... | November 16, 2010 - 23:04
I really like the idea of seeing scorch marks on the earth - also angels being the enemy - very good idea
rjnewlyn | November 17, 2010 - 15:21
Thanks very much Insert. Still figuring it out but I think it's beginning to settle into what it's meant to be.
And thanks very much for the cherry!
Rob
MistakenMagic | November 17, 2010 - 18:34
I know I shouldn't, but that first paragraph reminded me a bit of Disney's Wall-E!! Anyway, well done on a well-deserved cherry, Rob - waiting with baited breath for the next ;)
Magic xxx
fatboy74 | November 18, 2010 - 01:08
Yes, very good - keep going please! :-)
rjnewlyn | November 20, 2010 - 11:02
Thanks very much Magic and Fatboy. I can confirm that I didn't have Wall-E in mind when writing although these influences can be unconscious ...
Rob
Sooz006 | May 12, 2012 - 22:25
The temple sounds beautiful. Lily is interesting. By the time I come back she should have made it.
rjnewlyn | May 13, 2012 - 12:12
It was based on something I saw once in Korea, of all places ...