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Posted by sabzwin on October 15, 2009 - 13:38

Who are you?
Amiable glow,
A colourful show.
Broken, longingful stare,
Thick, bouncy, chestnut hair.
Speedy fingers,
Breaking the laws of physics,
worth more than any fine.
Tender but struggled kiss,
cheerful but muddled bliss,
Your friendly nature and charm so devine,
So honest and lovely, I wish you were mine.

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AlbertF | October 15, 2009 - 16:54

Looking at the title, I thought this would be an ode to your car's registration plate. But it isn't. Or is it? Is it a personalised plate on a car you'd like to own? I like a mystery.

sabzwin | October 15, 2009 - 20:05

Cars don't have bouncy hair? ;)

dilletante | October 15, 2009 - 23:24

Such a sweet poem.
Maybe it's a cute extraterrestrial?

ankari | October 21, 2009 - 20:57

"cheerful but muddled bliss,"
says it all about JMH ;)
ankari x