All the old dusty objects begin to fill my room,
All the dusty old objects that used to belong to you.
Some of them I wear,
Some I read,
Some I search through,
All I cherish.
They somehow look better when covered in dust,
That dust which is now all you are.
Now they begin to gather my dust too,
These old objects
Are now ours,
Not just yours,
With you gone
In some way we have grown closer,
As I become you.
As our dust mixes
On the sleeves of these old books,
On the keys of that old typewriter,
On the rim of those old glasses.
All the old dusty objects begin to fill my room,
All those dusty old objects that used to belong to you,
All those dusty old objects,
Now belong to me
Renewed with fresh eyes,
Under fresh gaze,
These old objects, new to me,
This old dust, gathers new dust too,
Fills my room,
Fills my life,
Fills my lungs,
As it filled yours
And took you from your room,
And made you dust.

Comments
Silver Spun Sand | May 7, 2010 - 17:57
This is so beautiful...and of course, sad.
I can identify so much with it...but that aside, the narrator's repetition and the entire structure of the poem adds weight and poignancy.
A richly deserved cherry.
Tina
insertponceyfre... | May 7, 2010 - 20:18
I loved this poem sam - the repetition works really well
samhennig | May 7, 2010 - 22:05
Thank you very much, both of you :)
tessdavies | May 8, 2010 - 08:20
Tess Davies
I like the way dust theme develops it as the poem goes along and how most people will relate to this.
Really good
samhennig | May 8, 2010 - 11:06
Many thanks :)
Dynamaso | May 11, 2010 - 07:05
I too really like the repetition of this and how it builds to the final line. Very good indeed.