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Posted by samhennig on October 26, 2010 - 17:52

Were you eaten by sharks,
I would be sad,
You would not be sad,
You would be dead,
So avoid the sharks,
I don’t feel like being sad
For the sake of a full shark.

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Comments

pinda | October 26, 2010 - 17:57

Had to read this a few times to get my head a round it. it's like a freaking riddle :) Good work on wordplay though!

Isn't meant to be 'Were' instead of 'where. for the first word?

samhennig | October 26, 2010 - 18:00

Haha, thanks!
And yes it is were,
Not quite sure why i put where?!

samhennig | October 26, 2010 - 18:00

Haha, thanks!
And yes it is were,
Not quite sure why i put where?!

pinda | October 26, 2010 - 18:01

No problem, simple mistakes can be made when writing such creative pieces of writing.

:)

samhennig | October 26, 2010 - 18:02

Ye it's funny how all the obvious things seem to go out of your head sometimes!

Highhat | October 26, 2010 - 19:31

I think it is a cute little ditty. hehe

insertponceyfre... | October 26, 2010 - 20:04

You made me laugh Sam, and this is crying out for an illustration

seashore | October 26, 2010 - 21:15

Yes this is my kind of humour!

shoe | October 27, 2010 - 09:25

Witty and wry, love it.

samhennig | October 27, 2010 - 09:31

Thanks!

fluffeu | October 27, 2010 - 10:25

I like it. Makes me happy. Life as simple.

chooselife | October 27, 2010 - 15:27

Marvelous piece.

maggyvaneijk | October 27, 2010 - 19:21

A fab way of saying I love you: don't get eaten by sharks :)

fatboy74 | October 27, 2010 - 21:46

Great this.

samhennig | October 27, 2010 - 22:34

Thank you for the comments :)