To you

To you there is nothing worse
Than time wasted,

Time wasted looking back,
Time wasted in the past.

To you there is nothing worse
Than time wasted,

But when I look back
At times spent with you,
I am happy.

To me,
This time could not be spent more wisely.

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | October 28, 2010 - 08:54

Hi samhennig,
I think as you get older, looking back isn't time
wasted, especially if you have led a full and
eventful life, it's only by looking back, that you
can appreciate what you have now.

A very beautiful poem, that tells of real true love,
very special. Thankyou for a lovely read.
Jenny.

seashore | October 28, 2010 - 11:28

I have read this 3 times and really like the economy of the writing.

samhennig | October 28, 2010 - 13:13

thank you both :)