A fragile connection

Short? Yes
Simple? I think not. There is a lot in this that has not been said, but speaks volumes (to me at least) all the same x

Nice one, shoe;-) And I agree, hands down, with kheldar. Still waters run deeep.

Tina

Im glad this meant somthing to you Kheldar, I tried to re-write it several times but came back to the first version, the others didn't seem to say it right,
I'm pleased I did now, X

Thanks Tina, I wasn't going to post this one, that you have seen somthing in it means a lot, :]

This is a brilliant little ditty, Shoe! Especially love the assonance/rhyme that creates such great rhythm!

Magic xxx

thanks Magic, I'm not really sure what you're saying, but it sounds like a compliment! so thank you very much, I promised myself I would learn more about the technicalities of writing, you may have just spurred me on,:}}}

Sod the technacalities shoe, just go with your instinct - its served you very well up to now x

I promise you Shoe that was a compliment ;) All I mean is that when you read your piece out loud it flows really well because of the rhymes you've included!

Magic xxx

This is a beautiful poem.

why, thank you TedShirt...