Imperceptible

Really touching and very well written; i like this one a lot - if it's real life you're brave to have put it down.
;)

Thanks darkenwolf,
This fell into my head last night and was still there this morning, It's more about people I know than me, pleased you like it.

You capture the atmosphere of love and loss beautifully, Shirley! Especially love the first and last stanza, well done :)

Magic xxx

This is so beautiful shoe! I really enjoyed, I really like the last stanza too. Especially the last line, its such a poignant image :)

Beeme xx

Thanks Magic and Beeme, glad you like this one.:}

really good piece shoe!

Well done on the cherry! :) x

Ta very much IPFNH!!

Quietly moving. Like it

really like this one shoe, its beautiful! K xx

Touching and beautiful. Hit home.

Tina

new Shoe
Well done, on the cherry!
Really enjoyed all of it.
Full of emotion and images.
The stanza
The sun climbs imperceptibly,

My shadow shortens
moves away from you,
it seems is a simple thing

Great I'll have to look up
the word imperceptibly new one to me.
julie xx

Thank you guys, glad you like it.

This is just lovely, shoe. I agree - final stanza is a corker :)

Well done on the cherry,

Rachel xx

Thanks Rachel, for reading and your lovely comment.:}

atmospheric, touching, wonderful

xx :--)