No surrender

really enjoyed this shoe. I love the breakfast description, and if it's autobiographical in any way, can I suggest you put the blackberry in the bowl with the weetabix tomorrow morning?

I'm please I found a window in my diary for this one shoe - for four lines there I thought you'd morphed into some 'guts & glory' war correspondent xx :--)

Just great..'o% fat leukocytes' gotta try some of that. Brilliant piece; short and thoroughly enjoyable, class act Shirley.;)

Chris XXX

Insert, one of our 5 a day? glad you liked it!!

love is a battlefield Kheldar, so I'm told, I'm a pacifist myself, appreciate you fitting me in though,xx ;~}

Enjoy the kittens threeleaf, low fat, high protien,
might get hairballs though! :~}

Totally agree with everyone; that breakfast imagery is brilliant ;) Brutal but with a great comic edge, Shirley. Well done!

Magic xxx

I agree with all of the above. I love the last lines and these lines especially;

'Masticated, bones left on the plate,'
'Weetabix drown like kittens'

I really enjoyed :-)

Beeme xx

What more is there to say, Shirley, except you have always such a fresh way of looking at things. I like Cheerios, as well as my portion of 5 and I also liked this;-)

Tina

Magic, Beeme and Tina, I thank you so, so much for your encouragement and kind comments, it really mean's a lot to me,:~}

Thank you cherry picker, winter cherries are sweet!

like this alot you got a lot in your poem , like it

Thank you very much exogenesis,:~}