I live in a street of terrace houses
where there should be a great community spirit,
but there isn't.
Mutual respect and tolerance are in shorter supply
than parking spaces.
With a pavement as a front door step,
net curtains are no defence
against prying eyes and snarling voices.
In an area where councillors fear to tread,
even the loud speakers are distant
on election days.
I always vote, but I didn't vote for this.
X marks the spot.
Four cars mark out the football pitch,
one of them is mine.
Another dent to my pride -
I wasn't even asked to the game.
Hordes of street kids
acting tough to their audience,
playing their starring roles to full houses.
This should be a one-way street,
but nobody pays attention.
Permanent "For Sale" signs
should read "No Way Out".

Comments
scratch | December 10, 2011 - 22:11
Well, There's nothing wrong with that. In fact shirewode it's very, very good. The second and final stanzas are super. Thank you.
ScoZen | December 11, 2011 - 15:45
I liked this one.
"...where there should be a great community spirit,
but there isn't..."
How true I think
ScoZen | December 11, 2011 - 15:51
"...where there should be a great community spirit,
but there isn't..."
Sad to say missing in a lot of streets.
celticman | February 12, 2012 - 20:11
I wrote a story called 'Our Street' once and this is quite like it.
Richard L. Prov... | February 13, 2012 - 01:37
Shyrewode---I enjoyed this gritty down to earth expose of your earnest thoughts. Cheers, Richard LP
KizWiz | February 22, 2012 - 07:49
A gritty & observant truth - I see no negativity here...
Well said, shyrewode!
K. :o)
shyrewode | February 22, 2012 - 18:32
Thanks. I appreciate all the comments.
Steve