Moustaches
By Sikander
Thu, 08 Dec 2011
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If I could grow moustaches
I should do so extravagantly
they would gather the foam from my coffee
and the head from my beer
and make my teeth
neat surprises
when I laughed
like a musketeer
and if you were sad
they would tickle your lips
to remind them
how to smile
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I can't find anything to
I can't find anything to pick at here. It's a light poem but it's so tightly written that nothing is out of place.
Particularly liked:
and make my teeth
neat surprises
when I laughed
like a musketeer
I suspect there'll be a well earned cherry coming this way real soon.
I hope you've got plenty more as good as this.
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This has left me with
This has left me with some...suprising images!
I like the musketeer one especially.
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