Alligators’ bites can disembowel.
Elephants’ feet generally harbour insects.
Jackdaws *kaw, loudly.
Mantis never, openly, pray.
Quail rarely sport top-hats.
Ululating Vixens warble.
**Xiphias yaw, zanily.
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*Alternative spelling of ‘caw’
** Common swordfish

Comments
animan | October 13, 2011 - 13:00
Wasn't sure about a synonymy between ululating and warble, but other than that most clever, I thought. I now know some zoology!
Silver Spun Sand | October 13, 2011 - 13:13
Hi there, animan. Thanks for reading. I guess 'warble' is just describing the kind of 'ululation'...well, that's my excuse, and I'm sticking to it;-)
Pleased you enjoyed.
Tina
animan | October 13, 2011 - 13:33
Extraordinary! I've just spotted a lesser-spotted ululator in my garden, which kind of proves your point, I guess!
RachelPatricia | October 13, 2011 - 13:46
Brilliant, Tina! I wish quails would sport top-hats more often - I think they really suit them ;)
Very much enjoyed :)
Rachel xx
hudsonmoon | October 13, 2011 - 14:27
Vivid portraits. I'm loving this.
Rich
Highhat | October 13, 2011 - 14:31
Pretty darn clever Tina
love the "swordfish" hehe
;)Pia
skinner_jennifer | October 13, 2011 - 15:38
Yes I agree with all above, very clever piece Tina.
Jenny.
ScoZen | October 13, 2011 - 16:35
I hear a lot of this Sand Lady "...Ululating Vixens warble..." from the house two doors down.
And I had "...Xiphias..." with chips the other night.
All in all a great night in.
Rhiannonw | October 13, 2011 - 16:47
Astonishing feat! Rh
MistakenMagic | October 13, 2011 - 17:13
"Mantis never, openly, pray." - love this play on words, Tina. The whole poem has a gorgeously Zen feel to it. Well done!
Magic xxx
Silver Spun Sand | October 13, 2011 - 17:40
Well, I can go one better than that, animan. We have a greater-spotted one in ours;-)
Silver Spun Sand | October 13, 2011 - 17:41
Thanks, Rachel;-)
I see you definitely been bitten by the bug, too. Splendid, yours. Enjoyed greatly and very clever.
Tina xx
Silver Spun Sand | October 13, 2011 - 17:44
Hi Hudson...just see what you went and started! And a darned good thing it is too. It's amazing fun, and it really gives me something to think about when I'm doing my boring chores. Thanks for your inspired inspiration;-)
Tina
Silver Spun Sand | October 13, 2011 - 17:45
Thanks, Pia. I must admit I often 'read' the dictionary, but just lately, much more vividly, which can't be a bad thing. So pleased you enjoyed, and thanks again;-)
Tina
Silver Spun Sand | October 13, 2011 - 17:46
Many thanks, Jenny. I just happened to notice you've just posted your offering to this zany exercise, so I'm just off to read it;-)
Tina
Silver Spun Sand | October 13, 2011 - 17:49
Your words are classic, ScoZen...and put my 'little offering' in the shade;-)
I do hope the ululations are not disturbing you too much this evening, and that the Xiphias didn't give you heartburn. I have heard that mushy peas go down a treat with it too;-)
Sand Lady;-)
Silver Spun Sand | October 13, 2011 - 17:50
Thank you, so very much, Rh...Much harder than it looks as you obviously appreciated.
Glad you enjoyed;-)
Tina
Silver Spun Sand | October 13, 2011 - 17:52
Glad you picked up on that one, Magic. I even made myself smile when I thought of it;-)
Thanks for reading and for your lovely comment. Hope you are having a good week.
Tina xxx
Dark Fox | October 14, 2011 - 10:57
I love this. Its clever and its very very good.
Sorry I have not been around... had a few months rest while moving to london and having a engagement ring presented to me. I have been in my own little bubble.
Good luck with future writings xxx
Dark Fox
Silver Spun Sand | October 14, 2011 - 11:34
Great to hear from you, Dark Fox. I was wondering how life was treating you. Well, it would seeem, and many congratulations on that engagement. Not only the ring is sparkling at the moment, I shouldn't wonder;-)
Thanks for dropping by and taking a read of this one; just a bit of fun, but it's amazing how it sets those creative juices flowing. Inspirations like this are worth their weight in gold.
Many thanks for the kind words and I wish you and yours, all the very best.
Tina;-)xxx
Dark Fox | October 14, 2011 - 11:38
Well, please feel free to check out any of my stuff now I'm back. Hope everything is okay with you.
Dark Fox
animan | October 16, 2011 - 09:19
Ah a greater-spotted one! Very impressive! Very rare!
Silver Spun Sand | October 16, 2011 - 09:57
To say the very least!!;-) Have a great Sunday.