Air Kisses

very strong and quite different. i like

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Thanks, artisus. Much appreciated:-)

Tina x

Wow, now this is quite different from what you usually write Tina, and I like it ;-)

I think you made the right decision on the structure of this poem- short and punchy lines are just perfect for what this poem is saying. The poem is crafted in such a way that it doesn't leave you with just a few memorable lines. It feels more like a ONE long and very powerful sentence, which is great because it works almost like a spear- long, but perfectly balanced so that when you throw it, it flies a long way and it hits the target ;-)

Well done as always.

Nathan.

Tina!you can turn your hand to any style and it works effortlessly time after time!I just loved it.lynne.x

This is great Tina, one I wish I could have written, I really like the taunting voice. Love Val x

Hi there, Nathan. Did anyone ever tell you, you have a way with words? Love your analogy of the 'sword'. Couldn't have put it better myself;-)

Seriously though, many thanks for your interest in my work. It is more than appreciated and I am glad that this poem hit the spot for you:-)

Tina x

Thanks Lynne. I much enjoyed writing this poem. One of those that just sort of 'came to me' as I was sitting at the keyboard.

Tina x

I know the feeling, Val:-) Many's the poem you have penned and I've thought to myself, I wish I could have written that.

Glad you enjoyed it.

Much love,
Tina x

'The tilt of my chin
my skin
each blemish
each mark
the mole on my thigh
the line of my nose
the concave curve of my hips
perfect bow of my lips
when I kiss
the air'

- I really enjoyed this description of the human form. The poem overall is an excellent piece with a very valid message. Like 'Siren' it shows that people are not always who you think they are! Well done on the cherry-pick :)

Magic x

Magic - thank you:-) Yes it is so interesting that you drew a parallel with 'Siren'. I thought that myself but then they do say great minds think alike, don't they? Hey and congrats to you. Hope your cherry was as tasty as mine. I somehow think it was;-)

Tina x