Black Lace and Burgundy


from the ABC set Silver Spun Sand Poems

Catlike, her fingers stalk the keys;
Für Elise from memory.

Con espressione, indeed
her masterful cadenza.
Momentarily, she pauses.

Time to make my move, enquire
maybe she’d like some wine.

A melodious Irish lilt precedes
her mellifluous Moonlight Sonata.

I pour our drinks. Place hers
on the Steinway baby-grand.
Burgundy and black lace,
a heady combination.

“Well, thank you,” she says.
“Nice hotel, this. Such
appreciative clientele.”

I bid her, “Do sit down.”
Pat the cushion beside me.

And so she does, smoothes
her dress, lights a cigarette.
It smoulders in the ashtray
crimson traced.

She touches my hand – bids
me undress her.

Politely I oblige,
slip them off, inch on inch,
those delicious cocktail gloves
made from black Breton lace.

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Comments

Bradene | November 10, 2008 - 13:09

Mmm very erotic. Nice Tina. Love Val x

Nathan Bednarek | November 10, 2008 - 15:14

This is so so so good. I agree with Val, the erotic mood of this piece works just great. Well done.

Nathan.

MistakenMagic | November 10, 2008 - 19:55

'Catlike, her fingers stalk the keys;
Für Elise from memory.' - These lines were delicious! A simply divine poem Tina :)

Magic xxx

Silver Spun Sand | November 10, 2008 - 23:31

Nathan - thank you. I had great 'fun' writing this poem. The piano is one of my passions and I have always dreamed of playing in the Ritz or maybe the Dorchester. In my dreams, perhaps.

Tina:-)

Silver Spun Sand | November 10, 2008 - 23:34

Magic - strange you should choose these lines. I had to study this piece for my grade 4 (or was it grade 5?) piano exam. It has always remained a 'family favourite'.

Pleased you liked it.

:-) Tina xxx

jennifer | November 11, 2008 - 15:51

Magic picked out THE line, yes!

Sexy as hell...reminiscent of the piano scene from Pretty Woman!

Phew!