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Posted by Silver Spun Sand on October 4, 2011 - 17:58
from the ABC set Silver Spun Sand Poems

Crazily
it shone...
that moment –
she
and I
and the ocean
Ripped
into shreds
the unbelievable
drenched
in serendipity –
steeped
for the summer
Sized
with sand –
fine
as a breath
Silhouettes –
golden-shouldered
girls
preserved
in brine
hung to dry
on a sigh
and a kiss
beneath
a popsicle sky
A splinter
prized
from the pier;
inscribed
her name
and mine...
dipping
my pen
in ripples
of silence
and a cornflower
afternoon...
A cormorant
eclipsing
a Strawberry
Moon

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Comments

Highhat | October 5, 2011 - 05:46

Wonderful Tina

;)Pia

Silver Spun Sand | October 5, 2011 - 06:41

Thank you, Pia;-)

skinner_jennifer | October 5, 2011 - 09:55

A beautiful poem of love Tina, really enjoyed
reading.

Jenny.

Silver Spun Sand | October 5, 2011 - 17:21

Thanks, Jenny;-) Really pleased you liked this one, and for taking the time to tell me.

Tina

Cavalcaderl | October 5, 2011 - 19:28

new Silver-Spun-Sand
Hi! Tina,
What magical explanatory words.
Your poem has and tells.
Like Brine.
Popsical sky.
Cormorant
and eclipsing
a strawberry
moon.
Really enjoyed!
have a good day!
Friday maybe snow ugh!
Change in weather temperature.
So colourful.
Whoops! definite yes, cherry!
just seen.
julie xx

Silver Spun Sand | October 5, 2011 - 21:03

Hi there, Julie. How is it you never fail to cheer me up with your wonderful words?;-) Thank you for them, and for making me smile...and I do hope you are wrong about the snow. Definitely 'Ugh';-)

Tina xx