On Earth as in Heaven


from the ABC set Silver Spun Sand Poems

Custom dictates the maid draw the drapes
this dull, rainy morning in Leamington Spa
for, Madame Dubois, you are gone from this place,
left this leafy-green crescent behind.

The grandfather clock, downstairs in the parlour,
ticks doggedly on, where you once sipped your tea,
crooked your manicured pinky, nibbled brown bourbon
biscuits with your rodent-like friends from the WI.

Upstairs, in the boudoir, your coffee, half drunk,
in its bone china cup, gold-rimmed and discreet
on the tray by your bed. Through the window
that weeps, the aroma of roses from the garden
below with their petals, blood red.

In your handbag an invite to an evening soirée
but please, do not fret. Regrets will be sent.
Madame’s sorry but she cannot attend.

ooo000ooo

Your funeral pyre, dear Madame Dubois, has long-since
gone out and crocodile tears long-since dried.
The Will has been read and your feline companion
with garnet green eyes, sits preening her fur –
now considerably richer than I.

Custom dictates the maid draw back the drapes
this bright, sunny morning in Leamington Spa.
On earth, as it was, and now as in heaven,
more than glass doth us part, dear Madame Dubois.

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Comments

Nathan Bednarek | September 18, 2008 - 11:46

This is a very unique piece and of course... I loved it! I especially like these lines:

'In your handbag an invite to an evening soirée
but please, do not fret. Regrets will be sent.
Madame’s sorry but she cannot attend.'

These lines are just so very clever. Well done again, and I guess soon enough again and again... ;-)

Nathan.

Silver Spun Sand | September 18, 2008 - 16:23

Nathan - we are going to have to stop meeting like this;-) Thank you for looking at my poem in such depth. I really do appreciate it.

It was a poem I particularly enjoyed writing. You know how when you write something sometimes, and you can see it all in your head.

Shall look forward to reading more of your stuff. Soon I hope.

Tina

tcook | September 18, 2008 - 16:28

'Miss Otis regrets she's unable to lunch today' springs to mind as I read it.

Silver Spun Sand | September 18, 2008 - 17:16

Does to me too;-) Great song.