Goodbye Godfrey


from the ABC set Silver Spun Sand Poems

Godfrey died today.
Drifted round for days
on his back
tiny little chap
or might have been
his tummy –
hard to keep track
of a fish’s anatomy.

His daphnia floated
aimlessly,untouched.
Usually it was gone
in five minutes flat
yet strangely enough
every day
he looked more bloated.

Then he began to list
flipped to port-side
so I surmised
he’d about had his lot
the poor old sod.

His scales always
so brilliant orange
turned pale and insipid
as I watched him float
right to the top
of his little glass bowl.

As I tipped him down the sink
heard the waste-disposal grind
made me think
how transient life is.

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Comments

Nathan Bednarek | September 29, 2008 - 10:57

I'm sorry for your goldfish. ;-)

I think this poem is great as it captures the images perfectly. I also used to have a nice aquarium of fish and some died quickly, some lived for up to three years, but each time they did I saw and felt exactly what this poem says. ;-)

Nathan.

Silver Spun Sand | September 29, 2008 - 12:55

Hi there Nathan. We used to have an aquarium as well but sadly it shrunk to just a goldfish-bowl. Now that too is redundant and I'm just left with my cat.

Thanks for reading:-)

Tina