Buried Treasure


from the ABC set Silver Spun Sand Poems

Just an ordinary, Sunday afternoon –
grandson, deep in concentration,
painting, at an old-pine kitchen table...

His subject – ‘stones’, or ‘Neolithic tools’,
as his granddad had described them;
dug up a day or so before, planting
bamboo at the side of his small pond.

“Just look,” he’d told him. "This one’s
an axe-head, and the other little ones
with the pointed ends, were arrows,
and all these – ‘knifes and forks’...

feel their razor-sharp edge. Imagine,”
he tells him – “forty thousand years ago,
someone sat, just out there where the willow
is now, and crafted these by hand.”

Granddad himself, had been like a dog
with two tails, when first he’d found them.
Rang museum, after museum...to no avail,
yet, a lady, only yesterday, as it was then,
said she'd ring back, and I’m still waiting.

Reward enough though, to see the look
on his grandson’s face; his eyes light up
as he showed him his haul.

“Did prehistoric man who made them,”
he asked, “look anything like this,
do you think?”

And granddad winked, as he glanced
at his picture. The paint had run a bit;
nonetheless, an undoubted masterpiece.

“One can only hazard a guess, what man
or woman, looked like in those times, or
what they would have seen, looking out
this window, countless aeons since, but
your guess – probably better than mine.”

That afternoon, was many, many years ago,
and how could I have known, quite
how much, it would glimmer and glow
in memory’s flickering light, or indeed,
how very precious – Granddad's stones.

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Comments

alex_tomlin | March 16, 2011 - 13:46

Lovely. The last verse gave me a warm feeling inside.

Silver Spun Sand | March 16, 2011 - 13:54

Alex - thanks so much;-)

A special poem for me...this one, as you can imagine. Glad it was for you, too.

Tina

skinner_jennifer | March 16, 2011 - 16:08

Hi Tina,

I like the closeness of the Granddad and the
Grandchild, this is such a touching poem.

Thanks for the read.

Jenny.

Silver Spun Sand | March 16, 2011 - 16:56

Thanks, Jenny. Pleased you enjoyed;-)

Tina

Dark Fox | March 16, 2011 - 18:43

I loved this poem. It has love between the grandfather and the grandson, but it also has the magic of a childs imagination. Thank You for the lovely read again Tina.

Silver Spun Sand | March 16, 2011 - 18:57

You are more than welcome, Kayleigh. Pleased you enjoyed;-)

Tina

hilary west | March 16, 2011 - 20:16

Nice touching snapshot SSS. I enjoyed it !

Silver Spun Sand | March 16, 2011 - 21:30

Hilary - many thanks. SSS;-)

Cavalcaderl | March 16, 2011 - 22:04

new Silver-Spun-Sand
Enjoyed all of this love
and closeness Grandad and grandson.
Stanza I like.
And grandad winked,as he glanced
at his picture. The paint had run a bit;
nonetheless, an undoubted masterpiece.
julie xx

Silver Spun Sand | March 17, 2011 - 07:55

Thanks, Julie. Glad you enjoyed;-)

Tina xx

MistakenMagic | March 17, 2011 - 11:34

Lovely poem, Tina - reminds me of my childhood days collecting fossils on Saltburn beach with my auntie and uncle :) A wonderful piece of poetic nostalgia!

Magic xxx

Silver Spun Sand | March 17, 2011 - 11:43

Thanks, Magic. I too love collecting fossils...my hubby included;-)

Pleased you enjoyed.

Tina xxx

fatboy74 | March 17, 2011 - 16:14

Lovely piece Tina. :-)

Silver Spun Sand | March 17, 2011 - 16:43

Thanks, fb;-)

InspiredWriter | July 1, 2011 - 10:00

This is really lovely, a beautiful depiction of a special memory!
IW x

Silver Spun Sand | July 1, 2011 - 10:06

Thanks so much for seeking this one out, IW;-) It holds very precious memories for me, and I am really pleased I managed to convey this to you.

Have a lovely weekend;-)

Tina x