Just Before You Go...

Stunning and sensual, Tina! Another great poem for the senses. Beautifully put ;-) Oh, and the Dylan quote is just the cherry on top!

Magic xxx

Thanks for your lovely comment, Magic;-) Hope you're having a good Sunday.

Tina xxx

What a beautiful romantic poem Tina. It's sometimes
hard to put love into words, but like Magic said,
you've put so much sensual feeling into this and
captured a moment in time.

I loved the lines:-

Gather me,
soft, in your arms, like
a bunch of fragile
wind flowers.

and that third stanza blew me away:-

your lips - sweeter
than heather honey...richer
than blackberry,
so fill my glass,
The taste of your skin -
salt as the Sea of the Arabah,
so let me drown; then,
rescue me.

Wonderful read as always Tina.

Jenny.

Hello Sand Lady.
I join MM & JS in congrats.
I'm quite envious

So pleased you found this romantic, Jenny;-) That was exactly what I had in mind when I wrote it, and I am pleased I managed to convey that to you.

Thanks, so very much for your lovely comment.

Tina

Well, hello there, ScoZen;-)

Many thanks for reading, and I can only say I am often in envy of you and your unique outlook on life. Pleased you enjoyed mine, too;-)

Sand Landy

I agree with all the above- truly sensual and romantic

;)Pia

Thanks, very much, Pia;-)

Tina

Magic Tina I loved it. :-)

Many thanks, fb;-)

Tina

Lovely romantic poem with images not easily forgotten, 'salt as the sea of the Arabah, so let me drown; then, rescue me'. Wonderful evocation.

new Silver-Spun-Sand
Tina, Just amazing the way
you can write so well,
and everthing fom your mind
and finger tips.
Great romantic poem.
And the cherries!
Over cloud here!
The acciddents in paper,
on Fireworks,and crashes
terrible. Alway's risks!
julie x

Many thanks to you, Hilary;-) Hope you have a good week.

Tina

You're right there, Julie, life is full of risks. There but for the grace of God go all of us - that motorway crash - horrendous.

Pleased you enjoyed this one, and thanks for telling me. Have a sunny week, hopefully, although it is very cloudy here today as well;-)

Tina xx

new ScoZen
Hi! Just reading your
gret story and poem, in the
marvellous Let's Start Again.
Anthology book. I bought so quick!
delivery. Editied by John Wilks.
Reading all gradually, and I'm in
OMG. Cover fab: back and front atmospheric
colour's, and of couple arm's round each other.
Well edited and printed, and numbered find,writer's
works, stories and poems. But great format write up,
fisr page, by Editor t.Cook (Tony) so perfectly true!
Judges by Mal Peet etc;
Have good day cloudy here.
See your Scotland, have a brother in Fife!
So is Jade Richards x Factor, should got through further. Saw the show Wow Factor she was in, and met
Great voice of 'Terry Winstanley great voice from Worthing, we went Assembly Hall Worthing, met all and photoed with raising money for Help the heroes. and met eight contestants, some signed all so nice and natural. The young ones to. Great evening.
The scenery smoke screens, lazer lights, cameras in roof, balloons excellently done, and produced.
I once went there, when I was only 19 stayed with cousin, we'd go dance there, bands. Felt so strange
be there! All performed well.
julie xx