Milk or Lemon?


from the ABC set Silver Spun Sand Poems

A pleasant reunion; thanks to ‘Friends Reunited’.
We chat of this and that; she serves afternoon tea
in her ‘English country-garden’...

She’d done all right for herself,
you could tell; cucumber sandwiches -
paper thin, nestle on delicate, lace doilies;

Madeira cake and scones with strawberry jam
or cream, or both.

She takes me for a turn around the flowerbeds;
the hot-house where the oleander wintered
and, again outside – beneath the olive tree

we reminisce. Go back to our gap-year
when she and I were students; to Kalamata
where olives ripened in the warm,
Mediterranean sun... and dark-skinned girls,

cheeks flushed, giggled – smiled, ‘Hello,’
fresh from shaking the branches; dirndl skirts
brim full of a good day’s harvest

and how they gave us some
and how she spat hers out in disgust
and how I laughed – branded her a heathen
but I was glad; all the more for me.

Bitter as hell though they were,
kidded her I’d an eclectic taste for them;
gullible but lovely, as she was.

But that was light-years ago. We’d changed
a lot since then – drifted apart,
the usual story; until now, of course...

one failed relationship each behind us
and two kids apiece. Unanimously we agreed
life could be a bitch, sometimes. And then
she looked at me; those same indomitable eyes.

“A shame,” she said, “olives don’t ripen
on the tree. Not here at least...and anyway,
I never did get to like them.”

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Comments

MistakenMagic | May 27, 2010 - 16:24

A beautiful tale, Tina! I love the images on the mediterranean:

'we reminisce. Go back to our gap-year
when she and I were students; to Kalamata
where olives ripened in the warm,
Mediterranean sun... and dark-skinned girls,'

Just reading this makes me feel so warm ;) Well done!

Magic xxx

Silver Spun Sand | May 27, 2010 - 17:24

Thanks Magic;-) Glad you enjoyed. Let's hope we get some more 'warm sunshine'.

Tina xxx

rjnewlyn | May 27, 2010 - 22:34

I suppose we may get olives ripening on trees in fifty years or so, except that most of us will be underwater by then. I liked the ambiguous emotions here around shared memories. Rob

Silver Spun Sand | May 27, 2010 - 22:49

Rob thanks;-) You caught the drift of this perfectly. Much appreciated.

Tina