One is One, and All Alone (IP)


from the ABC set Silver Spun Sand Poems

An unmarked, wooden cross; a grave –
freshly dug. No tributes, save a bunch
of windflowers, tied with fraying string.
Fog comes down, thick and fast, up here
in the churchyard on the moor.

At first light – they begin their search;
Father John’s gone missing. ‘Fishy
business, him and Ellie May, if you ask me...’
Only nobody did, but they say it, anyway.

They found him; hanging from the ‘lightning tree’,
or so they called it since the big storm
of a year ago last June; a charred, forked trunk,
all that remained, making a ‘V’ sign at the sky...

and in his cold-hands lectern, a bible and a note.
“Seems I’ve lost the plot, Lord...Somewhere
between ‘Our Father’... and ‘Amen’.”
Carries on the wind, an infant's
whimpering cries.

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Comments

celticman | February 7, 2011 - 23:17

Oh dear. We all lose the plot a bit, but perhaps not as dramatically!

Silver Spun Sand | February 7, 2011 - 23:50

;-)

fatboy74 | February 8, 2011 - 09:22

These are brilliant, lost the plot somewhere between our father and amen, and a v sign at the sky. Very much enjoyed Tina. :-)

Silver Spun Sand | February 8, 2011 - 09:47

Thanks, fb;-) I'm an expert at 'losing the plot'!!

Tina

Kilb50 | February 8, 2011 - 10:17

Enjoyed the unfolding narrative in this poem...and yes "Seems I’ve lost the plot, Lord...Somewhere between ‘Our Father’... and ‘Amen’.” is a stand-out line!

Silver Spun Sand | February 8, 2011 - 11:02

Thanks, Kib. Much appreciated.

Tina

skinner_jennifer | February 8, 2011 - 11:26

So I wonder what Father John got up to with Ellie
May? He must have really lost the plot and what
was in the note I wonder?

Thanks Tina for an intriguing read.

Jenny.

Silver Spun Sand | February 8, 2011 - 11:34

Thanks, Jennifer. Mysteries, mysteries;-)

Tina