Smoke curls low;
incense – ivory musk
and patchouli.
Once more tonight,
I drown in long, slow
strokes of you in me;
near enough
to feel your breath
upon my breasts
your tongue, brush
my nipple...now
just far enough away
to scan the vista
of the years – binds
a first, shy kiss
to this.
Comments
skinner_jennifer | December 13, 2010 - 09:50
Hi Tina,
Oooooh! this poem made me feel all warm inside.
Love those lines:- Smoke curls low; incense -
ivory musk and patchouli. Those are both my favourite
incense of all time.
This is such a sexual piece Tina, definitely oozing
sex appeal.
Thanks for the read.
Jenny.
Silver Spun Sand | December 13, 2010 - 09:51
You're welcome, Jenny;-) And thank you.
Tina
fatboy74 | December 13, 2010 - 15:39
well deserved cherry Tina - I think Jenny has captured it well with that big Oooooooh! Well done. :-)
Silver Spun Sand | December 13, 2010 - 16:21
Gee, ta, fb;-)
Tina
Kahdai | December 13, 2010 - 16:39
Great first part suddenly realise into very intimate poem still kindof innocent because of lovely ending K x
Silver Spun Sand | December 13, 2010 - 19:08
Gosh, Kahdai...glad it redeemed itself for you at the end;-)
Tina xx
SundaysChild | December 13, 2010 - 19:48
Some lovely imagery here, much enjoyed. xx
Silver Spun Sand | December 13, 2010 - 21:30
Thank you;-) Much appreciated, SundaysChild.
Tina xx
jennifer | December 20, 2010 - 11:23
Gosh, this one's a bit sexy! Very sensual, really beautiful, as ever, your endings are superb.
J x
Silver Spun Sand | December 20, 2010 - 16:27
My thanks to you, jennifer. Actually, I wrote this at the request of my partner, who asked why I never wrote anything sexy;-)
Pleased you enjoyed.
T x
littleditty | December 22, 2010 - 22:27
really lovely love poem, sweet and sensual, shy ending adorableness! Beautiful x
Silver Spun Sand | December 23, 2010 - 08:40
I love that word, ld...adorableness! I shall add it to my list of words that really ought to be in the dictionary;-) Hope you are well, and that you have a good Christmas.
Tina;-)xx