Tired of Counting Sheep...


from the ABC set Silver Spun Sand Poems

Five a.m. Looking
out my window;
next door’s security light –
snaps on. Rain spatters
the pane, and I strain
my eyes in the murk
of an uninspiring dawn...
Summer’s on its holidays
this year, and sod
the rest of us.

My cat stirs
from his favourite
place – my office chair.
A noise outside – like
the bark of a dog
but not quite. He arches
his spine, as a muntjac
darts across the path
into the bramble.

Feel my hand on
his bristling back;
try to reassure him,
and I am
this moment
this morning
this alive.

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Comments

Highhat | July 30, 2011 - 14:51

I know what you mean about the weather. You captured the morning well Tina-I saved this for last as I wanted to taste it fully- you know like you keep the meat till last. It didn't disappoint my tastebuds. Thanks

;)Pia

Silver Spun Sand | July 30, 2011 - 18:08

Thanks, Pia. So pleased you enjoyed and that you told me in such a lovely way;-)

Tina

skinner_jennifer | August 1, 2011 - 10:18

I've had many a morning feeling this way, so I could
really connect with those feelings.

Great read Tina.

Jenny.

Silver Spun Sand | August 1, 2011 - 11:04

My thanks to you, Jenny. Pleased you enjoyed.

Tina;-)