You say you love me.
You love football, as well;
curries – a pint with your mates,
and the way grass smells
after rain.
And so, you sit...glasses
on the end of your nose,
using a fork as a pointer
having a stab at Einstein,
God, and the Tories –
demolishing
my puff-pastry meat pie
with every jab.
In the meantime, I
will be somersaulting
over molehills
in a whisper of a gown...
making daisy-chains
from buttercups
awash in the sea
of your half-baked theories,
and when you happen
to look for me...
having concluded,
quantum mechanics
is bunkum
you’ll find me gone...
even if you choose
to believe I’m still here...
a bit like the moon...
even when you can’t see it
because,
sometimes,
stuff
just
happens.
Comments
ScoZen | October 9, 2011 - 19:45
Delightful Sand Lady.
There's a lot to be said for...
"...curries - a pint with your mates, and the way grass smells after rain..."
FTSE100 | October 10, 2011 - 05:26
Those damned quantum mechanics have broken my quantum car.
Always a pleasure to read your work.
Paul
Silver Spun Sand | October 10, 2011 - 06:50
I guess there is, ScoZen;-)
Pleased you liked, and thanks for telling me. Have a great Monday;-)
Sand Lady
Silver Spun Sand | October 10, 2011 - 06:52
Hi there, Paul;-)
Pleased you enjoyed, and all I can say is, 'Vroom, vroom!:-)
Tina
Highhat | October 10, 2011 - 07:26
A real plesasure to read Tina
;)Pia
Silver Spun Sand | October 10, 2011 - 08:00
And so, your lovely comment, Pia. Many thanks;-)
fatboy74 | October 10, 2011 - 11:28
Completely agree with others - love the way you say
and the way grass smells
after rain
which sets the tone of the poem brilliantly. Well done Tina. :-)
Silver Spun Sand | October 10, 2011 - 11:53
Many thanks, fb;-)
Hope your week is going well. I am hanging onto my hat, here, today. Very, very wind indeed!
Tina
Kilb50 | October 10, 2011 - 12:09
Very enjoyable, Tina...lots going on in this poem...puff-pastry, quantum physics, buttercups, molehills, football - all very good! And who was it said "stuff happens" ? Was it Rumsfeld ?
Silver Spun Sand | October 10, 2011 - 12:17
Hi there, Kib...yes, I think you may very well be right;-)
Many thanks for reading and for your lovely comment.
Tina;-)
skinner_jennifer | October 10, 2011 - 17:50
A very well put together poem Tina, really enjoyed.
Jenny.
skinner_jennifer | October 10, 2011 - 17:51
A very well put together poem Tina, really enjoyed.
Jenny.
Silver Spun Sand | October 10, 2011 - 17:54
Thank you, Jenny. Pleased you enjoyed.
Tina;-)
oldpesky | October 10, 2011 - 18:32
Seeing as I've been larking about this side of the fence recently, thought I'd pop in for a read of some real poetry. Never a disappointment when I land here.
Silver Spun Sand | October 10, 2011 - 18:38
Many thanks, op. A treat to see you. Pleased you enjoyed, and feel free to 'lark about' as much as you like;-)
Tina
andrea | October 12, 2011 - 21:51
Ah, this is lovely Tina. Although I disagree that quantum mechanics is bunkum :)
Vive la difference, eh? Or none of us would be here, probably :)
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Silver Spun Sand | October 13, 2011 - 09:52
I'd second that, Andrea;-) 'Vive la difference', every time!!
Tina
Kahdai | October 17, 2011 - 18:57
Wonderful Tina from, In the meantime to the part about the moon... even when you can’t see it! Thankyou! :) K
Silver Spun Sand | October 18, 2011 - 07:49
Thanks Kahdai;-) Pleased you enjoyed;-) T