At the far-end of the bypass,
opposite the garage you’ll find it
in all its dubious splendour –
an English country garden in the round,
for those with eyes to see,
at the point where five roads meet
and where no man dares to tread.
Nodding gently in the breeze,
Sweet Peas, Ladies Delight,
London Pride – Grandmothers' Bonnets,
in pink and blue profusion abound,
paying no heed to the tooting
of taxis and exhaust fumes.
Snapdragons with their red
and purple faces pucker up
their lips – vie for attention
midst clumps of Black-Eyed-Susies
soaking up the sun; choosing
to turn the other cheek to the growl
of the lorries and raucous roars
of leather-clad motorbike geeks.
A kind of oasis – sown here
by the wind perhaps, in a fit of pique,
inviting us to stop and think –
smell the roses ... For now at least,
in this our green and pleasant land.

Comments
threeleafshamrock | July 15, 2009 - 18:53
Beauty and the beast Tina, sounds lovely; beautifully described, I can almost get the scent from here ;)
Chris ;)
sarah wilson | July 15, 2009 - 19:17
Lovely Tina. I like pretty roundabouts, they really cheer me up:)
lenchenelf | July 15, 2009 - 19:21
motorbike geeks..an interesting phrase.
Silver Spun Sand | July 15, 2009 - 20:55
Thanks for that, Chris;-)
Actually - said roundabout is about two miles down the road from where I live; 'One 'o One' it's called, named after the garage.
Glad I conveyed something of its 'charm' to you.
Tina ;-)
Silver Spun Sand | July 15, 2009 - 20:59
...And me, Sarah. I must admit, way back in the seventies when I first started travelling to Dubai, it always amazed me that in a country so devoid of rainfall, they had such spectacularly planted roundabouts. My favourite was one I nicknamed, 'Budgie roundabout'. For the life of me I can't remember why so I'm off to dig up my ancient photos and see if it jogs my memory.
Many thanks to you for reading.
Tina;-)
Silver Spun Sand | July 15, 2009 - 21:05
Thank you for reading, lenchenelf and you are right, 'geek' is an interesting word.
In prehistoric times I used to go out with one such 'motorbike geek' and he certainly was true to definition... 'a person who is knowledgeable and (most of all) obsessive about a certain technology'.
Bless his cotton socks;-)
Jupiter | July 15, 2009 - 22:48
Strangely at odds - the first and last verses.
"where no man dares to tread"
yet
"inviting us to stop and think – smell the roses"
I can't help but feel I'm missing something here :-)
Invited yet unable to attend ....?
and the final line
"For now at least,
in this our green and pleasant land."
What is this one all about - Tina :-). Have I missed something? :-)
Silver Spun Sand | July 15, 2009 - 23:00
Jupiter, I thank you for reading.
I think the key words here are:-
"...for those with eyes to see."
Hence, 'Invited...' and yet as you so aptly put it, '...unable to attend.'
As usual, Jupiter, you have missed nothing:-)
Tina
Kilb50 | July 16, 2009 - 08:36
Lovely poem. I too struggled with the line "where no man dares to tread" until I fully realised the context - a roundabout at a busy five road intersection! "Inviting us to stop and think" conjoured an image of the traffic coming to a halt and drivers being drawn to this tiny oasis...a sudden outbreak of nature hysteria, perhaps!
Jupiter | July 16, 2009 - 08:37
Ha! Ha! Tina. Eyes to see, yet I see nothing ;-) lol
Thanks for taking the time :-)
Silver Spun Sand | July 18, 2009 - 21:03
My sincere thanks to you for reading and for indeed, stopping and thinking;-)
Tina
Silver Spun Sand | July 18, 2009 - 21:04
Dear Jupiter...as always, my pleasure;-)
Tina
Cavalcaderl | July 18, 2009 - 21:09
new Silver-spun-sound well grated to-gether
loved it all and the names of flowers! I hardly
can re-call. where no man treads if they did
be no Roses or flowers? would there? great!
julie xx-;)
Silver Spun Sand | July 18, 2009 - 22:16
Julie, I value your words, greatly.
You have certainly got to the point of this poem as no one else has. As you quite rightly say, somebody did tread there. So many people in this life of ours do some amazing things that all too frequently get overlooked. And usually they are things we all take for granted...until one day, they are not there anymore.
Tina xx
Cavalcaderl | July 23, 2009 - 04:08
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MistakenMagic | July 26, 2009 - 20:48
You know how much I love my nature/flower imagery Tina so this was right up my street! A very colourful poem!
Magic xxx
Silver Spun Sand | July 27, 2009 - 11:07
So pleased I managed to paint a lovely picture for you, Magic.
The roundabout in question is only just down the road from me and is tended so lovingly by an old gentleman I see there sometimes. He usually wears a straw hat;-)
Tina xxx