Summer ...the First Time


from the ABC set Silver Spun Sand Poems

Breathless, one summer,
at the top of a hill,
a blameless blue sky –
her skin, smooth as silk;
halcyon days –
a brief moment in time...
strawberry fairs
and sweet, lilac wine

lectures and lechers –
varsity balls...
cruddy, cramped lodgings
in all-hallowed halls
where we’d jump into bed
at the drop of a hat –
trade drags on reefers
in post-coital chats.

She’s filing her nails –
I build castles in Spain...
tell her I love her...
she laughs in my face.
Breathless, one summer,
at the top of a hill,
a blameless blue sky...
yet winter came, still.

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Comments

Highhat | June 29, 2011 - 05:31

Another corker Tina-love the "blameless blue sky" thanks for an enjoyable read.
;)Pia

Silver Spun Sand | June 29, 2011 - 06:42

Glad you enjoyed, Pia;-)

Hope there are 'blameless blue skies' for you today.

Tina;-)

Overthetop1 | June 29, 2011 - 13:41

Beautiful. I particularly loved `Yet winter came, still.' Perfect ending.

Silver Spun Sand | June 29, 2011 - 14:51

Many thanks, OTT;-)

Tina

L G Meadows | June 29, 2011 - 14:57

Ahh, winter came still. Doesn't it always? Great read!

Silver Spun Sand | June 29, 2011 - 15:39

Pleased you enjoyed, and I do hope you have a touch of summer today...wherever you are;-)

Tina

barryj1 | June 29, 2011 - 21:27

"lectures and lechers –
varsity balls..."

With my daughter going off to college in New Hampshire two months from now I'm not so keen on the lechers. I like the freshness and unpredictability - nothing hackneyed here! Winter might have come to put a temporary damper to "halcyon days" but it can't erradicate the memory of happiness past or yet to come.

Silver Spun Sand | June 30, 2011 - 06:58

Hi there, Barry;-)

Many thanks for reading, and I wish your daughter all the best in her 'pastures new'.

Tina

skinner_jennifer | June 30, 2011 - 14:02

Hello Tina,

thankyou for such a beautiful read.

Jenny.

Silver Spun Sand | June 30, 2011 - 15:10

You are more than welcome, Jenny;-)

Tina