Sweet Nothings

A wonderful progression of beautiful images, Tina! I especially love the final stanza and the 'moon sat on his shoulder'. This poem shows how imperfect love can in fact be the most perfect love in the world ;) Brilliant!

Magic xxx

really enjoyed this

That's it in a nutshell, Magic. Must be the poet in you;-) My thanks to you for reading. Glad you got exactly what was intended from it. Have a good week. Not long till Easter;-)

Tina xxx

Really appreciate your reading this and commenting so positively. Thank you;-)

Tina

I really enjoyed this to. I love the last stanza in particular, a truly perfect ending with beautiful images.

Beeme xx

So beautiful; haunting, even. An absolute pleasure to read :)

Rachel xx

Thanks so much for that, Beeme. Your words made me do just that;-)

So glad you enjoyed. Memories...where would we be without them?

Tina xx

Rachel - really appreciate your lovely comment. Thank you so very much;-)

Tina xx

More than welcome, the pleasure was all ours!

:)

Rachel xx

"and how the moon
sat on his shoulder
all the way home"
These lines steal all the credit.
Nice one.
Vidit

Thank you, Vidit. Your comment highly valued;-)

Tina

Well done on the cherry Tina, richly deserved :-)

Beeme xx

new Silver-spun-sand
Yes, well done on the cherry!
Cleverly done as poet would.
Love last stanza to.
Just the rabbithe made
out of a hanky,
and how the moon
sat on his shoulder
all the way home.
It's all a cracker!
julie xx

Beeme - how nice of you;-) Much appreciated.

Tina xx

Hi Julie;-) Thank you for reading. I really envy people who can fold serviettes, hankies and whatever. Me, I'm hopeless at such things.

So pleased you enjoyed and thanks for telling me.

Tina xx

I have nothing to add except I thought it was lovely! xx

Congratulations on the cherry, Tina :)

I'm also envious of people with such talents, especially people who can make little boats out of crisp packets! I'm just all fingers and thumbs and haven't got the patience!

Rachel xx

Thank you, so very much;-)

Tina xx

Each to their own, I guess, Rachel. I think you have found where your true talents lie, and so has ABC;-)

My sincere thanks to you. Glad you enjoyed.

Tina xx

Just p-p-p-perfect! You have a knack of making the ordinary, extraordinary; class act!

Chris XXX

Well hello there, Chris;-) You have brightened a grey day for me, except it isn't half as bad as the weather where you are, obviously. I shall try and send some sunshine to you.

Thanks for your words, Chris. Glad you enjoyed.

Tina XXX

Very sweet poem Tina, how we accept people without letting different 'faults' & talents, change our minds. Could you please explain what this Rothmans was, I don't know if you mean smoking on a bus, or if it is a new slang term for something one might get up to on a first date. ;) I am a little left behind these fast moving times. I can make a few things folding, infact last week showing off to my little sister I made a blow-up cube out of her chip wrappings. K xx

Hi there, Kahdai;-) Yes, you guessed it, Rothmans - a brand of cigarette, and I am talking about the old days here, when smoking was permitted on the upstairs of buses.

As for your 'blow up cube' out of chip wrappings, I bet it went with a bang!

Thank you for reading and glad you enjoyed.

And by the way, who isn't left behind in these fast moving times? I know I am;-)

Tina xx

Hi Tina, I used to smoke on the bus before too, good times, eh? :) I am kindof glad you can't smoke in some places now, I still think pubs atleast should be allowed. My cube, I think she made it into a game-die(not sure, dice?), I hope my mama binned it after. I like to pop into your imaginative-mind & memories every now & again, it's nice of you to let us. Hei, if we be left behind, I reckon it better, so rather where you are anyway. ;) xx

Hi again, Kahdai;-) I certainly agree with you that I think pubs and private clubs should be given the option as far as smoking is concerned. And as for those good times, yes they were.

By the way, you can 'pop' into my mind any time you like...well, almost, anyway;-)

Tina ;-)xx

You really are on a roll! Yet another gem. I love how you managed to explore the emotion, the setting and the characters all in one short poem. Amazing skill.

Just beautiful. Well done.

Nathan.

Thanks for reading, and commenting so positively;-) Glad you enjoyed.

Have a good Easter, Nathan, and I hope things are well with you.

Tina xox