"Come on you lazy good for nothings, I thought you
were hunters, what do you think this is a picnic?"
Jonah had the men digging pits to trap animals.
There was a chill in the air and Nathen and his men
were cold, tired and hungry. They had not eaten in
two days, Jonah said he would only let them eat, when they had finished digging ten pits, they had
already dug five, the pits were so deep, at least
fifteen feet down and big enough for a bear to fall
into.
This was against everything Nathen believed in,
normally they never touched bears in the summer, as
food was plentiful, but now Nathen and his men were
being forced, they had no choice.
Tired and hungry Nathen looked up at Jonah,
"we will not do anymore digging, until you give us
some food."
Jonah suddenly became extremely angry, he walked
towards Nathen, who was standing within inches of a
pit they had just dug.
"So you want feeding do you?" determined to make an
example of Nathen, to his men, Jonah grabbed Nathen, the poor man was to weak to fight back.
As Jonah grabbed him, Nathen's men could only watch
in fear. Then Jonah punched him in the stomach
and threw him into the pit they had just dug.
Nathen stood up, "you can't leave me here, a bear
will fall in and I will be eaten alive."
Jonah just laughed and pointed at Nathen's men,
"this is what will happen to any man who tries to
disobey me, so don't come begging to me, or you
will all end up in pits, I can always find others
to do digging. Now go and get branches to cover over the trap."
As the men lay the branches, they were afraid to
even look at Nathen, what could they do?
Nathen just lay there in the pit, knowing his family would be so worried about him. He thought of
Evelyne and wondered how she would manage without
him. But then he thought of Fern, he knew she was
sensible, she wouldn't let anything happen to his
family.
His thoughts then turned to Jay, if he was to die,
who would teach his son to hunt, who would show him
how to survive in the forest? Suddenly he became
angry, he tried to climb out of the pit, he shouted, "you cannot leave me here!" but it was no
good, Jonah and his men had gone.
Hopelessness set in, as he fell back into the pit,
all he could do was lay there waiting for what might come along and fall in, he hoped it wouldn't
be a bear.
To be continued ........

Comments
SteveM | March 28, 2011 - 15:49
This one's a real cliffhanger. Who gets Nathen out? The men returning, the bear, or someone else?
Steve
insertponceyfre... | March 28, 2011 - 16:09
yes - a real cliffhanger Jenny. Hurry up with the next part!
skinner_jennifer | March 28, 2011 - 16:19
Hi Steve,
ha, ha! we will have to wait and see, but seriously,
you're great to stick with it and I love your comments.
Thanks so much.
Jenny.
skinner_jennifer | March 28, 2011 - 16:21
Hi insert,
glad you're still with me on this story, it's so
worth it when you get comments.
Thanks for reading.
Jenny.
Highhat | March 28, 2011 - 17:13
Yes a real cliff-hanger Jenn- how exciting. I hope he gets out alive but how. . .?
skinner_jennifer | March 28, 2011 - 18:27
It's great to have you on board Pia, because of the
wonderful feedback, I get quite excited writing
this story, I'm practically sleeping, eating and
living the story at the moment, if you know what I
mean.
Thankyou again for reading it means a lot to me.
Jenny.
pinda | March 28, 2011 - 18:37
:) I too wonder what'll happen to poor Nathen. This story is developing really smoothly Jennifer, and the way you're developing the character's is amazing. Judging from your last comment, you will be writing this story for a while because the positive feedback is going to keep rolling in :D
X
Pinda
skinner_jennifer | March 28, 2011 - 18:55
Hi Pinda,
that is really kind of you to say. Yes the story is
going to be a real long one and I really do hope
people stick with it.
It makes it all worth while to know you enjoy it.
Thankyou.
Jenny.
pinda | March 28, 2011 - 20:21
Glad you feel a sense of 'worthwhileness' whilst writing this mesmerizing tale Jennifer. I commend you on being able to keep up with these mini-chapters on a daily basis, yet keeping the originality, quality and spark in your work.
I'm glad you've decided to making it a long one, this is actually the first story I've been captivated by on this site, and boy what a story it is :)
X
Pinda
skinner_jennifer | March 29, 2011 - 09:47
Thankyou again Pinda.
Jenny.
well-wisher | April 6, 2011 - 22:18
Still enjoying your story. I could easily imagine it as a movie or TV mini-series.
skinner_jennifer | April 7, 2011 - 08:58
Oh! how I wish that your imagined idea would come
true well-wisher, to see my story come alive on the
screen would be amazing. I cannot thankyou enough
for your amazing comments, it's so much appreciated,
you are very kind.
Thankyou again for reading.
Jenny.
Kahdai | June 13, 2011 - 13:27
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