People had once more began to get on with their
lives.
Jonah and Gerth, had become new men, their mission
was to help as many people as they could. Eventually they joined up with Joshua, Arvid and
Jermiah, it was almost as if, there was something
in the air affecting them.
Four boulders of rock were erected, in memory of
the Crystal Ships. They were erected right below,
where the Ships had hovered. It became a Spiritual
place, where people came with gifts of flowers,
crystals and special stones, in honour of their
saviours from the skies.
In the future, rumours went around, of Gods from
the heavens, watching over them, that in times of
unrest, the gods would return.
Things seemed to be at peace.
But lurking in the dark shadows, of one of the
caves, was a man named Gregor, he was very happy
and proud of himself, he had managed to escape,
being captured by those futile men from the sky.
"One day I will return...once again to cause havoc
and destruction." he laughed an evil laugh, "Ha!
ha! haaaaaaaaaaaaaa!"
But that is another story.
Comments
Silver Spun Sand | May 19, 2011 - 16:50
Gosh, Jenny, this is a wonderful final chapter, tidying everthing up so effectively, and beautifully (love the idea of the four boulders in memory of the Crystal Ships)...but now there is Gregor to think about, a fly in the ointment, most definitely.
I shall look forward to hearing about his adventures, and in the meantime, you should feel proud of yourself. The Chosen Ones was a challenge, that most of us would find difficult to rise to, but you have stuck at it, and produced some delightful stories and characters, that I shall remember for a long time to come;-)
Tina
Highhat | May 19, 2011 - 17:16
Yes an epic story. I agree with Tina that it is really very well done that you stuck to it- all 69 parts.
This story reminds me a bit of a film from the 50's- or a serial rather. It was very cinematic- would make a good film.
Thanks for all the good reads. I shall also remember this story for a long time.
As you pointed out at another time there will always be an evil person to take over again and that is how you conclude this.
;)Pia
skinner_jennifer | May 19, 2011 - 18:39
Hi Tina,
I am over the moon with your wonderful response,
thankyou so much. Again I'm grateful for your help
with the spelling, it's now exactly as I want it to
be. You take care, get better and have a great weekend.
Jenny
skinner_jennifer | May 19, 2011 - 18:45
Hi Pia,
what a wonderful thing to say, about the story, how
I would love to see it up on the big screen, as I
keep saying.
Again thankyou for reading and sticking with it till
the end, it's nice that you and Tina won't forget
this story, that means a lot to me.
Jenny.
skinner_jennifer | May 19, 2011 - 19:07
Dear Readers,
I would like to dedicate this story to Pinda, who
passed away, I feel it fitting, as he was such a
dedicated follower of the story, it is so sad that
he never got to read the ending, which is why I'm
dedicating it to him.
You are in my prayers and your family are in my
thoughts.
Jenny.
oldpesky | May 19, 2011 - 21:38
Ah, big sigh. Well, well, well. What can I say? First of all, congratulations on tackling such a lengthy project, sticking with it and carrying it out to the very end.
Throughout the story there were many great characters who we all came to love and care about, which is what writing is all about.
Your plot had many twists and turns that kept us on our toes and had us eagerly awaiting the next day's chapters. Like someone said earlier, it was like those old serials like Flash Gordon or something when they would end on a cliffhanger leaving audiences sweating over the hero's fate. You crafted those moments very well indeed.
Sixty nine chapters? Who would've thought? How many words is that altogether? So very pleased for you. Wish I could do something similar. Maybe one day.
I liked the way you broke it up into small bite-size chapters each day. It meant they could be read whenever I had a break in work or a spare five minutes. Others should take a leaf out of your book when posting long pieces that are part of an even longer story.
Although it would be difficult to highlight individual chapters where editors may have given cherries, I think you deserve a lorry-load of cherries for the fact you have completed this project and kept the story moving along without any holes in the plot or characters being forgotten. Plus, you have given a lot of people, myself included, a lot of joy and inspiration. Thank you.
You can put your feet up tonight knowing you have pulled something off that others can only dream about.
Best of luck with future projects.
Kevin
ps loved that ending with Gregor.
skinner_jennifer | May 19, 2011 - 21:58
Dear oldpesky,
I am truely moved by your kind words, I'm so pleased
that you enjoyed reading and getting involved with
the characters.
It's been a long journey, the story itself has
almost taken over my day to day living, even the
housework has taken a back seat, but who wants to do
housework, when you can write.
Thankyou very much for your kind words on my future
projects, but I think this story is going to be hard
to follow, for me anyway.
Well I hope you have a great weekend.
All the best to you,
Jenny.
SteveM | May 21, 2011 - 19:21
Hi Jenny,
Lovely finish. The last paragraph was great... the final cliffhanger. Keep the reader wanting more.
If you mail me on steve.mogg@tinyonline.co.uk I'll send you that story I mentioned a week or 2 ago.
Looking forward to your next one.
Steve
skinner_jennifer | May 21, 2011 - 19:32
Hi Steve,
glad you enjoyed the ending. I'm very grateful to
you for reading and commenting.
Jenny.
skinner_jennifer | May 21, 2011 - 19:51
Hi Steve,
I could not send my message on your e-mail, I do not
have the means to send, but if you go to my contact
e-mail address on Skinner_jennifer@sky.com you will be able to contact me. I'm sorry that this is not
professional, it's just that I'm new to all this
computer stuff, hope you can get in touch, because I
will look forward to you contacting me.
I really do want to read your story.
Thanks,
Jenny.
RachelPatricia | July 29, 2011 - 13:13
Well, Jenny - I'm here! I've finally read the whole story, all sixty nine amazing parts, and my, what a story it was! Honestly, I know a few others have said this already but this is one of the best stories I've ever read - so epic and cinematic that I feel as if I have just watched a full-length film! Your own spirituality and love of nature is woven into this beautifully, Jenny, and I can't congratulate you enough on seeing this through to the end - so glad you did, it was an absolute pleasure! :)
Any plans for the sequel? Hope so!
Loved it, all of it, I think you're amazingly imaginative, and turning Jonah around at the end shows just how compassionate you really are - a lesser soul would've just killed him off, I think you're wonderful for that!
And the dedication to pinda was both touching and fitting - sure he would've loved where you took this story, and I'm sure you did him proud :)
Well done, Jenny, will shut up now but I'm just so in love with this story and its characters that I just had to tell you, hope you are well and enjoying your weekend :)
Thanks for a brilliant and unforgettable read!
Rachel xx
skinner_jennifer | July 29, 2011 - 14:50
Dear Rachel,
what can I say? you brought me to tears with your
wonderful comments, I can hardly see what I'm
typing. I'm such a sensitive nutcase and your words
just moved me so much.
You have been so kind and considerate, I really
wish I could say yes, there is a sequal, but I'm
afraid times are different since I started this
story three years ago, for one I never had a
computer and just wrote it for my own enjoyment and
also I finished the story, before I actually put it
on to ABC Tales, which helped, but it took me three
years to write it.
I don't know if I have the inclination to write
some more, sometimes trying to continue a story,
can go completely wrong, for instance I have every
single book by Terry Brooks, that's over 22 books,
I always loved his work, but his last book does tend
to drag on, repeating stuff that I've already read
in his other books, I would hate for that to happen
with this one.
May be sometime in the future, I will write some
more, but for now I want to really thankyou again
for all your words of support and for reading this
story to the end.
Hope you have a great weekend.
Jenny. xx