The Christmas Mansion Mystery ( Part Twelve )


from the ABC set Stories

It was mid morning on the Monday at the Henvey household. Alice
was in the garden with the boys, she kicked a football around with
James, while Sam sat up in the tree house, his Father had made for
them, some years ago.

James picked the ball up and ran to the tree, shouting up to his brother.
“Hey Sam! Come down and play football.”

Sam just turned away from his brother, so Alice came over. “Sam I know you're upset, but James needs you more than ever now, please
come down.”

Sam started to descend the tree, just as Cherish came out of the kitchen
door. “Alice!” she shouted out, “there's a phone call for you, from that
Detective Brentford guy, down at the police station.”

“Oh dear..that's all I need!” exclaimed Alice. “Okay I'll be right there.”

Alice turned to James and Sam. “I'll be back in a moment, I've just got
to answer the phone.” She turned and ran up the garden.

“But Mum!” shouted Sam, “I have something I need to tell you.”

“I won't be long!” she called back.

Alice walked through the kitchen and down the hallway, to Andrews
office. Picking up the receiver. “Hello! Alice Henvey here.”

Cherish sat in Andrews office chair, as Alice answered. “You want us
down at the Station at 1.30pm, well I suppose we'll have to be there,
yes we'll do our best to get there on time. Thank you!”

Alice hung up. “Bad news?” Cherish enquired.

“Yes, as you probably heard. It's just as well my parents are coming
this morning.”

Alice went back out into the garden, to tell her sons what was going on.
“Sam...James, I have to be at the police station for 1.30pm, so I want
you both to be good, while I'm there.”

“Mum!” said Sam, feeling agitated.

“What is it Sam?”

“I want to go back to school, I miss my mates and it's boring here, also
I'll miss the end of term Christmas Party, if I stay here. I still want to
come back for Christmas though.”

Alice was devastated, she thought selfishly, that Sam would want to
be with her, but obviously now he was a teenager, she realised he was
growing up. “What about you James...do you want to go back to school?”

“No Mum!” said James, “I want to be here with you and grandma and
grandpa.”

“Okay Sam, I'll phone the headmaster tomorrow, if you're sure that's
what you want.”

“Yes it is Mum.” said Sam walking back into the house.

Mary and Nancy were in the kitchen preparing food for the evening
meal. Nancy had been very quiet, not her usual chatty self.

“Anything wrong?” enquired Mary.

“No...why?” replied Nancy.

“Oh it's just that you seem quiet, not your usual bubbly self,” said
Mary.

“Well to be honest after what's happened, I don't feel bubbly.” Nancy
put down the knife and turned and ran upstairs to her room.

“Nancy...Nancy! I'm sorry, come back.”

Nancy was feeling guilty, there were things she hadn't told the police,
things she knew, but was to afraid to say anything.

Mary was still chopping onions, when Alice came into the kitchen,
“Where's Nancy? I thought she was helping you.”

“Oh! She wasn't feeling well, so she went to lie down.”

“What's wrong with her?” enquired Alice.

“Woman's problems, I think...she's been getting very tearful since Mr
Henvey's death.”

Mary couldn't understand why Nancy was so upset, she was glad he
was dead, though she would never admit to it openly. She had seen things and knew things, which she kept to herself. Mary liked Alice and enjoyed working for her, but when Mr Henvey returned home, the atmosphere was always tense.

Cherish was still sat in Andrews office, she spent a lot of time in there,
trying to sort through the finances. There were the house bills to be
paid, Andrew had normally taken care of all that. So now Cherish was
taking over, Alice was happy to let her get on with it.

The phone rang, Cherish picked up the receiver. “Hello!” The voice
on the other end, asked for Miss Clarke. Cherish was annoyed that
Nancy had given out a private Number. “Who is this please?”

The voice on the phone said it was a friend. “Miss Clarke shouldn't be
giving out this number, it's a private Number.”

Whoever it was, put the phone down. Cherish stormed out of the office
and marched into the kitchen. Mary was chopping the meat.

“Mary I want you to stop what you're doing and go and tell Nancy, I
want to see her in the office.”

Mary didn't stop immediately. “Please Mary will you go...Now!” said
Cherish in a stern voice.

“Yes of course,” replied Mary, “you haven't got to shout.”

“Don't be cheeky Mary.”

As Cherish walked back to the office, Mary stopped what she was
doing, she made her way over to the sink, to wash the meat off her
hands, wiping them she cursed. “The devil woman, shouldn't be called
Cherish, should be call the Wicked Witch of the West.”

Mary made her way up the back stairs from the kitchen, then along the
corridor to Nancy's room. Knocking...she called out. “Nancy...Nancy!”

“What?” came the reply.

“Cherish wants to speak to you in the office, you'd better come straight
away, she's not in a very good mood.”

“All right! I'm coming.” replied Nancy.

Nancy sulked and wiped the tears from her eyes. She went downstairs,
ignoring Mary and went to the office. The door was open, Cherish
called her in.

“You wanted to speak to me?”

“Yes...look I'm not going to tell you again Nancy, private phone calls
are forbidden. Someone was asking for you...a man...he would not say
who he was. I don't like this at all.”

“I'm sorry,” said Nancy, “it won't happen again.”

“What's wrong with you girl?” asked Cherish annoyed to be having
this conversation.

“Nothing! I have a headache, may I go now?”

“Yes I suppose, but get back to the kitchen and help Mary.”

Nancy went back to the kitchen, but was thinking about going down to
the police station, she wasn't looking forward to that.

To be continued..............

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Comments

oldpesky | December 13, 2011 - 09:25

Mmm, interesting. The plot continues to thicken and I still haven't a clue who the murderer is. And I want to know what secret Nancy's hiding. Roll on the next chapter. Great stuff, Jennifer. Keep up the good work.

skinner_jennifer | December 13, 2011 - 09:41

Thanks for reading oldpesky, It's good to know you're still enjoying.

I appreciate you letting me know.

Jenny.

RachelPatricia | December 13, 2011 - 09:44

Jenny, you are the queen of intrigue! I'm stumped too, but am loving the ride. Very cinematic - you'd be great at screenplays, I reckon. Looking forward to the next installment, great stuff :)

Rachel xx

skinner_jennifer | December 13, 2011 - 09:51

Hi Rachel,

you and all the readers faith in me, is what's
keeping me going, I'm so grateful for your feedback.

Hope you are well and thankyou again for your words
of support.

Jenny. xx

Silver Spun Sand | December 13, 2011 - 10:41

'Cinematic' - that was the word I was looking for, and Rachel got there before me;-)

I'm with Pesky...haven't got a clue 'who dunnit'! And I can't wait to find out, but I think (and hope) there is much to happen before then.

Very much enjoyed.

Tina;-)

skinner_jennifer | December 13, 2011 - 12:20

Dear Tina,

that's such a nice compliment and yes, I'm sure
there's more to come on the horizon.

I'm really glad I can keep you guessing, it makes
it more interesting for me.

Thankyou for reading and the wonderful comment.

Hope you are having a good Tuesday.

Jenny.

Overthetop1 | December 14, 2011 - 17:20

I have no idea whodunnit - but I'm with you all the way. You are our new Queen of mystery on ABC. Really great stuff Jen.

skinner_jennifer | December 14, 2011 - 20:22

You are too kind OTT, really glad you're still
enjoying.

Your comments are more than appreciated.

Thankyou so much.

Jenny.

sue dinum | December 15, 2011 - 21:41

Hi Jen, excellent dialogue and you tell the majority of the story through it which gives the writing vitality. I would’ve liked to see a little more sense of time and place (location) in this episode, just a few brush strokes would flesh out the scene and add to the reality and atmosphere, and avoid the sense that the action is taking place in a vacuum. But you’re doing a fine job and it’s all good practice because you learn most by doing it yourself. Well done!

Trev

skinner_jennifer | December 16, 2011 - 11:23

Thanks for your support Trev,

I know exactly what you're saying, it's not that I
don't want to write more of a description of the
time and place of the location, it's just that I'm
afraid of making each Chapter too long and putting
the reader off. It's really hard to strike a happy
medeium on a screen, so the reader doesn't get bored.

Also I want to get this story finished before
Christmas, so that's another reason I'm kind of
rushing it along. I think if I was actually being
paid to write, I could be much more in depth, as you
mentioned, even study up more on 1971.

But thankyou all the same and I always take on board
what you are saying, because I find you such a
professional writer.

Thanks again for reading and the help and support,
you don't know how much I appreciate it.

Jenny.