Craggy Bays Through Mists of Time

Love the use of dashes and ellipses, Jenny - they work really well. You've got some beautiful and haunting images in this one! Well done!

Magic xxx

yes, very evocative imagery, and I did like so much the contrast when the clouds clear, and the picturesqueness appears once more, – combined with the cosy home!
Rh

This is so very atmospheric, Jenny and if it were a piece of music it might very well be 'Fingal's Cave'...a tune which was running through my mind whilst reading it.

Very much enjoyed.

Tina

dhi jen, feel as if i've been out for a walk on a wild weathered day - and ended up by the radiatior.

nice work!
maisie

Hello Magic,

thankyou for reading this poem, it was one of those
pieces, that just came into my head and had to be
written down.

I'm so glad you enjoyed and thankyou for letting me
know.

Jenny. xxx

Hi Rhiannon,

glad you could pick up on the wild venture over the
moors, then to the cosy fisherman's cottage.

Thankyou for taking the time to read, always
appreciated.

Jenny.

Hello Tina,

you know, I've never heard that piece of music, you
mentioned, 'Fingal's Cave'...so now I'm going to go
on the internet and see if I can find it, I'll come
back and let you know what I think.

I feel very honoured that you should hear a piece of
music, while reading this poem and I'm very grateful
to you for letting me know.

Thankyou so much for reading and commenting, it's
always appreciated.

Jenny.

Hi maisie,

glad I could stir up a long walk over the moors
for you, Wuthering Heights comes to mind, when
I think of the moors.

At least you could go in your imagination, which
can be just as much fun and safer.

Hope you're keeping warm tonight.

Thankyou for reading and leaving a comment, much
appreciated.

Jenny.

Dear Tina,

have just come from the internet and listened to
that piece of music by Mendelssohn, I have heard
this piece before, but never realised it was called,
Fingal's Cave. It was so stirring and I feel so
happy that you would consider that music with my
poem.

I have now got it in my head, that one day I would
like to go to this cave, it looks amazing and so
wild, something I must do at some point.

Thankyou so much for introducing me to this music
and this place.

Jenny.

This is very atmospheric Jenny. I felt myself transported to the scenery so well described as it is. You have done a really cool job on this one.

Just a little tweak- I'd look at the use of the word menace which you have used twice- it seems to repeat where it shouldn't. Have a look at it and see if you can find one word to substitute it with just the one place- then it will be perfect.
Hope you don't mind me saying so?
;)Pia

Hi Pia,

thanks for reading this poem and letting me know you
found it atmospheric, I really like that.

I can now see exactly what you mean and I'm grateful
that you let me know. I've now changed menace to
danger.

Thanks again.

Jenny.

Thankyou so much Cherry Pickers for those yummy cherries, they look wonderful and they're really appreciated.

Jenny.

Well done on the more than deserved cherry, Jenny. Yes, Fingal's Cave is beautiful, isn't it. I too should like to go there, some day;-)

Tina

Thanks Tina, for the congrats and also for introducing me to Fingal's cave and yes it is
really beautiful.

Jenny.

Happy New year Jennifer, hope it's a great one for you.x

This is a great poem, I really loved it! So inspiring! So beautifully worded, it feels as if I was 'in' it, so... realistic. Great post =)

Savannah

Hi there oldpesky, thankyou for dropping by, and I
wish you and your family a very Happy New Year.

Take care,

Jenny.x

Hi Savannah,

I'm so glad you found this poem inspiring, I know
you have a love for the sea, so I was very honoured
that you enjoyed reading it and thankyou for telling
me.

Jenny.

Jenny Yet again I find myself tardy. All the previous comments admire this and rightly so; an evocative subject expressed in unstrained poetic language. The imagery conjures the atmosphere and puts me right in the saltiness and the wind.

Enjoy those thoroughly deserved cherries ;)

Hi scratch,

yes I always enjoy the cherries when I get them,
as I also appreciate your kind comment.

I'm so pleased you could feel the atmosphere in
this one, it was what I hoped to convey.

Thankyou for reading and letting me know.

Jenny.

really moved me, well deserved cherriesx

Thankyou so much for reading widdicombe81, I really
do appreciate your kind comment. Glad I could move
you with this one. Thanks also for the congrats on
the cherries.

Jenny.

your welcome