In the darkness of the night,
stalking through copsewood,
the feline,
her eyes wide open,
body rigid,
she spies an owl with beedy eyes,
follow a bat,
through the skies,
seeking for to suprise,
the moth that's flying by.
In the darkness of the night,
stalking through copsewood,
the feline,
her eyes wide open,
body rigid,
she spies an owl with beedy eyes,
follow a bat,
through the skies,
seeking for to suprise,
the moth that's flying by.
Comments
Highhat | February 11, 2011 - 08:44
Very close to nature Jenny- well done
;)Pia
skinner_jennifer | February 11, 2011 - 10:06
Thanks for reading and commenting Pia, this was just
a quick poem I put together, that I liked the sound
of and enjoyed writing.
Jenny.
apeljo | February 11, 2011 - 12:10
Very nice! I know what you mean about the ones you enjoy writing, they just pour out! I can tell how well my poems flowed by the amount of lines I scratch out, I never erase anything!
skinner_jennifer | February 11, 2011 - 15:26
Hi apeljo,
you are very understanding of my work, I love to
read your comments, you seem to know exactly where
I'm going. I think that your writing is great and
as long as you get pleasure out of it, that's all
that matters.
Again thankyou for reading and commenting.
Jenny.
Kahdai | February 18, 2011 - 20:28
A lovely cat poem Jenny! x K
skinner_jennifer | February 19, 2011 - 14:16
Hi Kahdai,
I love to watch cats, when they don't know you
are watching them, they are such mysterious creatures. I have actually been told I have a
cat as a guardian angel, I like that idea.
Thankyou again for your kind comment and for
reading.
Jenny.
Kahdai | February 21, 2011 - 12:41
Aaw thats lovely I have drawn angel cats before! I do too useto have three! :) K
skinner_jennifer | February 21, 2011 - 15:57
Wow! Kahdai,
you have cats as angels too, that is great,
apparently the cat that is my guardian angel,
used to get thrown out of the house alot by its
owners, I don't know if it was my grans, because
she used to breed persians, so maybe it was one
of hers, I really don't know.
Thanks for coming back to me.
Jenny.