Divine Union

Oh, Jenny...this is lovely.

(Just two tiny typos. Should be 'honeyed tones' in the second stanza, and in the fifteenth, should be 'ate too much')

Such a romantic picture you paint with your words, and it has a good rythm and rhyming structure.

More than well done, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it;-)

Tina

Thankyou so much Tina for your kind comment and for
reading.

I totally agree with you about the mistakes, so I
have put them right and thankyou again for your
help.

Hope you are having a sunny day, where you are.

Jenny.

new skinner_jennifer
Yes, Jenny, my heart was like
melting chocolate drops.
From beginning to end, just so
beautiful, word's images people you
have all managed write about.
Reminded me of the song "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" words. Ah! such wonderful memories you have blended in.
I Must read again.
have a nice week-end
julie xx

Thanks for your kind comment julie, I'm glad you
enjoyed reading this one and thankyou for letting
me know.

You have a great weekend too.

Jenny. xx

Beautiful, it's like watching a romantic story unfold. I also love the idea of a lemon and cream dress. I'll keep a note of that!

Hi maggy,

thankyou for reading and hey do you know what? I've
always wanted a forest or wood wedding, dressed in
those colours, with a garland of ivy around my hair,
with roses intertwinded. But sadly I'm a bit to old
for all that now, still I suppose I can dream.

Again thanks for the great comment, hope you do get
to wear the dress of your dreams, when you get
married.

Jenny.

well this is very romantic >Jenny and I love the way you pass it on to the next generation. A tender poem which I enjoyed reading. Thank you.

;)Pia

Thanks Pia,

you know me, an old romantic softy.

Really glad you enjoyed reading and thankyou for
letting me know.

Jenny.

ah, cast that magic spell Jenny!! such a charming story well penned, and did you marry your prince charming?

Hi shoe,

well I didn't marry my Prince Charming, but I
certainly have lived with one for nearly fifteen
years and we are very happy.

Thankyou for reading and letting me know you
could see the magic in this one.

Jenny.

Very beautiful and touching, Jenny! You capture both innocence and wisdom so well. A truly moving poem!

Magic xxx

Thankyou so much for reading Magic and you have
made my evening with your words.

Thankyou again.

Jenny.

Lovely. Such nice thoughts, Jenny... very well expressed, and as Tina has already said, good rhythm and rhyme.

sue

Thankyou so much for reading sue,

glad you enjoyed this poem, I tried for the rhythm
and rhyme, something I haven't been doing a lot
lately, so I'm glad it worked okay.

You have a great weekend.

Jenny.