A Drifter wandered along the winding road, through
a small village, stopping he had no idea where he
was and to be honest, he didn't really care.
He was tired and thirsty, having walked all night,
the problem was not the dark, he never minded the
dark, but the cold chill he hated.
He was always alert to danger, eyes constantly
searching for possible hazards, being a Drifter,
there's always an element of risk, but he was
never scared, what was the point in being scared, what would be - would be, in any case, if anyone,
or anything came near him, he could defend himself okay thankyou.
The road had been dusty, he felt as if he'd
swallowed a highway. Staring ahead, he caught
sight of a running stream, it looked so refreshing,
that he quickly began to pick up the pace.
The village was quiet, nobody was around, it was
so early in the morning. The Drifter stepped up to
the stream and began to quench his thirst, drinking
in the cool clear running water. Some Sparrows
hopped close by, searching for worms, but the
Drifter did not even notice them.
Having quenched his thirst, he decided his next
job, was to find a quiet - safe place to sleep,
after his nights drifting. Looking around, he found
what looked like a comfortable place to sleep, it
was like a cozy den, with some soft straw on the
ground. He made his way over, to take a closer look, he decided it was just what he was looking
for, it was well protected from intruders, so he
crawled in. It was not long before he was asleep.
Carol Anne awoke, she was desperate to get out and
play, it was the school Summer holidays and it
looked like being another hot day. She gobbled down
her cereals and took her dish and ran it under the
tap water, leaving it to dry on the draining board.
Her Mother was down in the laundry room, doing the
weekly wash. Carol Anne shouted down to her Mother,
"I'm off out to play, see you later." She was just
about to go out of the back door, when her Mother
shouted, "don't you go to far Carol Anne."
"No Mum, just going to call for Billy, we're playing down the stream."
She banged the back door, walking down the garden
path and across the road, Billy was already coming
down to meet her. They ran down to the stream to
play in their den, as they entered, they got the
suprise of their life, for there curled up on the
straw - Carol Anne had put down, was a hedgehog
all snuggled up in a ball asleep. It looked like
our Drifter friend had been found.

Comments
Silver Spun Sand | August 15, 2011 - 18:30
This one kept me guessing right until the end, Jenny;-) No wonder the drifter said 'he could defend himself very well, thank you'. A prickly customer and no mistake.
Many thanks for a lovely read.
Tina
RachelPatricia | August 15, 2011 - 19:11
Ah - a hedgehog! I so didn't see that coming!
You are a mistress of suspense, Jenny! Will definitely be looking out for the second part now and can't wait to see were our 'drifter' friend leads us - a wonderful opening to a story I'm sure we're all going to love :)
Rachel xx
Highhat | August 15, 2011 - 19:56
You made me a bit scared with this one Jenny and I should have known better coming from you. Nevertheless it ended so beautifully. Is there more?
Thanks for a wonderful story. I rather like the structure - sort of prosetry. Very good.
;)Pia
alex_tomlin | August 15, 2011 - 20:13
A lovely little story - great ending. Very sweet.
skinner_jennifer | August 16, 2011 - 09:24
Hi there Tina,
glad I could keep you guessing on this one, it was
fun to write.
Thankyou for reading and your wonderful comment.
Hope you are having a peaceful week.
Jenny.
skinner_jennifer | August 16, 2011 - 09:31
Hello Rachel,
I'm afraid that this was the story, there isn't
anymore to it. I feel a little bit guilty that
you wanted more, but I just wanted to write a
short story and this one came into my head so easily.
I do hope you're not disappointed and I'm sure the
hedgehog will be fine. If I do think of a continuing
story line, then I'll put it in, but at the moment
nothing is coming.
I'm glad you enjoyed this story and thankyou for
telling me. Enjoy the rest of your week.
Take care,
Jenny.
skinner_jennifer | August 16, 2011 - 09:39
Hi Pia,
I'm afraid as I've told Rachel, that there isn't
anymore to this story, unless something comes into
my head, but on saying that, you never know!
Sorry if I scared you, but I wanted the beginning
to be a bit of a mystery.
I'm glad you liked the structure of the story,
hopefully a beginning, a middle and an end.
Thankyou for reading and letting me know your
thoughts.
Hope you are having a good week.
Jenny.
skinner_jennifer | August 16, 2011 - 09:40
Hello alex,
thankyou for popping by to read my story, I'm very
happy that you enjoyed reading and thankyou so
much for letting me know, much appreciated.
Have a peaceful week.
Jenny.
Sharmi | August 16, 2011 - 12:12
Back to do some reading, the title caught my attention, as I smelled adventure. I ended up feeling all mushy instead. Great read! :-)
skinner_jennifer | August 16, 2011 - 14:40
Hi Sharmi,
well I'm certainly glad I didn't disappoint you,
even though it wasn't adventure.
Thankyou for reading and letting me know.
Jenny.
ScoZen | September 10, 2011 - 15:21
A nice prickly tale indeed.
skinner_jennifer | September 11, 2011 - 15:20
Hello ScoZen,
thankyou for reading my prickly tale, it's good to
know you got something out of it and thankyou for
letting me know.
Jenny.