A FEAR TO OVERCOME

You manage to convey the feelings of panic felt by the narrator very convincingly here, Jennifer...And then the reasoning that comes in stanza seven.

Very well done on this one;-)

Tina

Yes I liked the everyday-pasties and pies-elements of fear.

Thankyou so much Tina for your kind comment, I based
it on a blind lady, that I see quite often on the
bus, when I go to town. I think blind people are so
brave.

Jenny.

Hi celticman,

Yes don't you just love that smell of pasties and
pies? They say your senses are stronger, when you
cannot see.

Thankyou for your comment.

Jenny.

'A hundred voices fill my ears,
different tones, some cheerful,
some suggesting sorrow, some anger,
so I exercise my mind in a positive way.'

- love this stanza, Jenny. This is a brilliant poem, highly original and a great exploration of the sense.

Magic xxx

Hi Magic,

thankyou so much for your kind comment, much appreciated.

Happy Christmas to you and yours and also, a
prosperous New Year.

Jenny.

I thought this well conveyed the speaker's (your?) fears of going out amid crowds of people but it was also positive and encouraging.

I have alot of anxieties about going out in public, myself. I've been mugged four times and it's left alot of fear in me; especially when there are lots of young men or teenage boys around.

Hi well-wisher,

that is absolutely awful, to have been mugged, I do
know what you mean about the anxiety of crowds and
public places. I too get unsure and tend to try not
to look at people, it's so sad that we live in a
world, where there is so much fear.

It must be twice as bad, for someone who is blind.
Thankyou for your comment and for sharing your
feelings.

Jenny.

Jenny, I know the felling so well,! I wish I could be like this poem and keep calm in crowds, well done if it is like you, goodness though if I was blind I would be so worse K xx

Hello Kahdai,

I totally agree with you, I cannot imagine being
blind, very frightening.

Thankyou for reading and commenting.

Jenny. xx

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Hello Jenny,

This is a very evocative poem. I really felt the walker's fear, the inward fight with oneself to summon the courage to carry on. Fear is so life limiting! It stops us from doing so much.

That aside, you write beautifully, Jenny.

Moya

Wow! thankyou Moya,

I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading this.

Thankyou so much for letting me know.

Jenny.