If by Chance!

Good morning Jennifer, nice little love poem you have here. Should we be happy with the love we have or is there a better love out there if we take the chance? It's an age old question.

Thankyou so much oldpesky, this piece came to me in
the early hours of the morning, the words just came
into my head.

Thanks for reading and the great comment.

Jenny.

I really like this, Jenny, so very romantic.

Just a tiny typo in the penultimate line, should be 'divine'.

This one, my favourite stanza:-

"those gentle feelings taking over
easier finding a four leaf clover,
teasing you with sensual pleasure
all your dreams...you two together,"

Well done on this one Jenny;-)

Tina

Thankyou so much for your help Tina, where would I
be without you?

I'm very glad you liked this one, it's really kind
of you to let me know, it makes all the difference
when people give a comment, it really helps so thankyou again.

Jenny.

I think you did very well with the rhyme as well. Nice romantic poem

;)Pia

Sweet poem Jenny, I like the fact it can be seen as a bit philosophical as old pesky said about being content with what we have or deciding to seek out another better love but this is tempered with the light touch of the language and tone of the piece. It works on so many levels and this gives it such added depth and texture.

V.C.

Thankyou so much for reading Pia, you know your comments are always welcome.

Jenny.

Hi there V.C.Willow,

It's a pleasure to read your comment on this piece,
you have given me such a boost of confidence, which
I really do appreciate.

Thankyou for reading and taking the time out to tell
me you enjoyed it.

Jenny.

Beautiful poem, Jenny. And very wise words indeed! Lovely :)

Magic xxx

Thankyou so much Magic, it's very kind of you to let
me know you enjoyed this poem.

Thankyou again for reading and commenting.

Jenny.xxx