The Muse

This is sensual and intriguing, and most importantly, poetic.

Thanks so much hilary,

I'm so pleased you found it sensual and intriguing, it was inspired by my partners granddaughter.

Also I'm glad you found it poetic, which as you
kindly say, is the most important thing.

Jenny.

I agree with Hilary; sensuous and poignant. I'm sure this poem would melt in the mouth when read aloud ;-)

Magic xxx

I agree with all that has been said, Jenny.

Very seductive indeed, and I love the vocabulary you have chosen. This, in particular:-

"they are free thinkers...
aligned with the stars,
unaffected by the fraught
world around them,
now so young...
some call them nonconformists,
they've shed their bitterness...
lost in their Art,"

Much savoured;-)

Tina

I can actually visualize this like a movie playing in my mind.

I love the line "her willowy fingers display long black nails a symbol of who they are."
That is just a really great line.

Great job!

Hi Magic,

it's really kind of you to read this one, I love
your idea of a poem that would melt in the mouth,
that's so beautiful.

Anyway I'm so glad you liked it and thankyou for
letting me know.

Jenny.xxx

Dear Tina,

thankyou so much for your kind words, I'm so pleased
you enjoyed reading this poem, I too like those lines, they kind of put everything into perspective.

I'm glad you savoured and enjoyed, thankyou again
for letting me know.

Jenny.

Yes a truly sensuous read Jenny- so languid, slender words and soft tone- almost filled with love and affection for these young people. Beautiful- This must be Goth? It sounds wonderful- I must look it up and see some pictures of their art and listen to some music. Thanks for the introduction..

;)Pia

Hi Pia,

I'm so pleased you enjoyed this poem and found it
sensuous, with love and affection.

You are right this is about Goth, of which my
partners granddaughter is very much into, but more
than that, I have found them a very gentle people,
who are friendly and not a bit nasty, it's more
about having their own individual look and the art
is absolutely beautiful, which I'm sure you'll find
out, when you look it up.

Some of the music is loud, which I enjoy,
I would say their music mysterious, also
mystical, but then that's right up my street too.

Thankyou for reading this piece Pia, and I more than
appreciate you letting me know.

Jenny.

Hi Nikki A,

I cannot believe I missed your comment. Your more
than welcome and I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading
this piece.

Thankyou for letting me know.

Jenny.