My Day off Work with ABC Tales


from the ABC set Poems

I went and took the day off work today,
thinking it would be a cool way to spend a day.
Going for a walk, having a swim,
cutting the grass, going to the gym.
Cook a nice meal, have a bottle of wine,
yes this is the way we love to dine.
Take a quilt, cosy up on the floor,
put on some music, some David Gilmore.

But my plans all fell apart,
they all went wrong from the start. Got up late,
put the computer on, words, rhymes and rhythm's
suddenly I'm gone.
I think, I no "ABC Tales" is where I'll go.
Hours have passed, I think 'Oh no!'
reading other peoples stories and poems,
it takes time, making comments line by line.
I really should be reading a book,
but its no good, I can't resist a look, at what
others have written, I think I'm hooked.

Oh I've definitely been bitten by this "ABC Tales"
bug.
And all my partner got from me was a kiss and a
hug. Oh well!

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Comments

celticman | July 21, 2010 - 18:52

Yes very nice. Some addictions are better than others!

skinner_jennifer | July 22, 2010 - 08:33

Hi Celticman, your comment was much appreciated.
Jenny

Jacquelineann | July 22, 2010 - 15:15

I am hooked too! your poor old partner though!

Cavalcaderl | July 23, 2010 - 15:23

new skinner-jennifer
yes.I know what you mean.
Mine used to do shifts awful?
Now one year and I am sharing?
his computer.A very warm welcome
Difficult t.v. on.Or needs to sue it.
I am learner.Your very good for 7 weeks.
And the lay out and poetry good
julie xx.

skinner_jennifer | July 26, 2010 - 10:29

Hi Julie
Thanks for your comments, I only bought this
computer at the beginning of June, never been
on one before, but my son is teaching me.
ABC Tales was the first thing I found.
But I have folders of stories and poems I have
written, I just love it.
Jenny.

skinner_jennifer | July 26, 2010 - 11:52

Hi Jacquelineann
Thanks for the reply to my poem,
sorry its a bit late in replying,
have been so busy reading other
peoples stuff, that I kind of
forgot all about my own.
Anyway it was good to hear from
you.
Jenny.

TREVOR MAYTUM | July 26, 2010 - 16:58

Very good, Jenny. Nice way to spend a day off work, nice rhymes and imagery - Love Pink Floyd too. Give your partner a hug. Partners of writers are long suffering.

skinner_jennifer | July 27, 2010 - 08:54

Thanks Trevor,
Glad you get the picture. Just wish
there were more hours in the night and
the day, so that when ideas come to me,
they did'nt take up so much of my time.
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for replying.
Jenny.