Well howdy Folks, are yer comin to are gig?
We'll be roastin up a hog
yer can do a hoe down jig,
If yer bring with yer some gal
that'll be just fine aswell,
but there be plenty here that's swell
ter feast yer eyes upon aswell,
We has a special guest tonight
it be 'Sea Sick Steve' alright?
he be singin is heart out
as we lot do scream and shout,
Am just gonna mix it up...
cause I is a real country pup,
in these here hills is where ah sing
and where I loves to do ma thing,
So come on folks...
now don't be shy,
yer gotta join the fun
we'll all get high! Yipeeeee!
Comments
oldpesky | May 4, 2011 - 11:08
Looks like you got yourself a rootin' tootin' barn dance going down tonight. Yeeeeha!
skinner_jennifer | May 4, 2011 - 11:52
Sure thing! oldpesky.
Thank yer surely.
Jenny.
Highhat | May 4, 2011 - 14:54
I can just see them with their applecider and moonshine. Well done Jenn
;)Pia
skinner_jennifer | May 4, 2011 - 15:32
Ha, ha, Pia, congratulations you guessed right it
was Hill-Billy and West Country.
Cheerz! fer reading and commenting.
This was just a bit of fun!
Jenny.
maisie | May 4, 2011 - 17:23
Yippeee hand round that moonshine... :)
skinner_jennifer | May 4, 2011 - 17:27
I'll drink to yer health maisie!
thanks fer poppin in.
Jenny.
Silver Spun Sand | May 4, 2011 - 17:54
Enjoyed this one very much, Jenny. I could just hear all the YEEEEHAAAs in the background whilst I was reading it. Liked this stanza especially:-
"We has a special guest tonight
it be 'Sea Sick Steve' alright?
he be singin is heart out
as we lot do scream and shout..."
Well done;-)
Tina
skinner_jennifer | May 4, 2011 - 18:09
Why thank yer kindly Tina,
it was real good of yer to pop by and share in the
fun. YEEEEHAAAs! an all.
Thanks Tina.
mikepyro | May 5, 2011 - 02:34
well I really enjoyed the humor and the voice of the piece, it helps carry it through the rough points, mainly the rhyming style that trips up now and then.
I have trouble reviewing poems as there's rarely enough content to get in depth, but I must say I had some real fun reading this piece. It's nice to see a poem that doesn't wallow in depression or self pity. :D
(I'm harsher than most, I know, but I believe pos and neg must be mixed in a good review)
skinner_jennifer | May 5, 2011 - 08:47
Hi mikepyro,
you know I thought this one up while I was in the
shower, it just came to me in about three minutes
flat. It wasn't anything serious, or meant to be a
brilliant piece, I just wanted to have a bit of fun.
I was glad you enjoyed the humour of it, don't worry
about anything you say, I'm just glad you read it
and made a comment.
Thanking yer kindly!
Jenny.