A RENAISSANCE TALE

This fine poem brought a very vivid picture to my mind.
So well described Jenny

;)Pia

Hi Pia,

thankyou again for your great comment, you know I
always appreciate what you have to say.

Hope you're enjoying your week so far.

Jenny.

You really did evoke 'times past' with this delightful poem.

A couple of minor points. You need an apostrophe in 'maiden's chamber' in the first stanza, and one in the third from last, i.e. 'king's court'. Also, should be 'radiant' in the fifth.

I like, very much, the way you describe her gown as hanging down 'like an angel in mid-air'.

You have a wonderfully vivid imagination, Jenny, and you paint, for the reader, an equally vivid picture with your words;-)

Tina

Hi Tina,

again thankyou for helping me, I really thought I'd
checked and double checked everything, Oh well!

It's very kind of you to read and give me help, I'm
really glad you enjoyed this poem.

Hope you have a great rest of the week.

Jenny.

I agree with Tina - you've managed to create the atmosphere very well

Hello insert,

thankyou so much for your kind words, I'm glad you
liked it and thankyou for letting me know.

Jenny.

Hi Jenny,

Just logged on after a few days off. I like this one very much. As Tina said - evokes times past - You're very prolific, having trouble keeping up with all your output. Everything you write is very readable.

Steve

Hi there Steve,

thankyou so much for reading and leaving a great
comment.

I really do appreciate you reading my pieces, it
encourages me to keep writing, when I know people
enjoy what I write.

Thankyou again and I hope you are well. Enjoy the
rest of your week.

Jenny.

The mideval feel comes to life in this. Love it.

Hello L G Meadows,

that was exactly what I was trying to capture, being
a lover of all things Mediaeval, is what inspired me
to write this piece.

Thankyou so much for reading and letting me know
your thoughts, it's much appreciated.

Jenny.

Reminds me of that wonderful folk song, 'the queen and the soldier' I think it's called, lovely Arthurian feel to it,

What a great comment shoe,

thankyou so much. I hope you are having a nice day.

Again thankyou for reading and commenting.

Jenny.

I could picture this - much enjoyed.

Thankyou so much for reading seashore. I'm so glad
you enjoyed it, and thankyou for letting me know,
much appreciated.

Jenny.

Really enjoyed this, Jenny - took me away to a more opulent time and place for a moment, thank you! ;o)

Loved that image of the angel hanging in mid air, too, and thought the further descriptions of it were beautiful, thanks for another great read :)

Rachel xx

Hi Rachel,

it's wonderful to know that you enjoyed reading this
piece and to know that you captured the scene.

Thankyou so much for letting me know and for reading.

Hope you're having a great week.

Jenny. xx

"her Gown hung like an Angel in mid air,"

A beautiful image, perfectly captured and framed in just a few words. The whole poem is magnificent and truly breathtaking. Personally, I'd give this a whole basketful of cherries ;-)

One of my favourites from you. Well done.

Nathan x

Hi Nathen,

that is so kind of you to leave such a great comment,
it's really made my day.

thankyou for reading and for letting me know your
thoughts, it's very much appreciated.

Jenny. x