A Symbol of Hope

Jenny, this is brilliant. That opening stanza really grabbed my attention and the rest was so, so beautiful! I absolutely adore that fourth stanza and you painted the scene so well, and I love the Robin, always look out for him in Winter, and although heart-breaking there is so much positivity in this, I just love it I think this is definitely one of your best and it was a real pleasure to read, thank you so much! :)

Rachel xx

Wow! that was really quick.
Thankyou so much cherry pickers,
I'm so pleased you liked my poem.

Thankyou so much again.

A very Happy Jenny.

Dear Rachel,

what can I say? I'm overwhelmed and very happy.

I'm so pleased you liked this poem, you saying
it's one of your favourites has given me so
much hope.

Thankyou so much for reading and letting me know.

Jenny. xx

I thought this was very beautiful too. Haunting (without a pun)- just the atmosphere is great.

;)Pia

Wonderful, Jenny and more than well done on the cherries;-)

Tina

Thankyou for reading this poem Pia and for the
great comment, always appreciated.

Jenny.

It was very kind of you to let me know you enjoyed
my poem Tina.

Thankyou for reading and for the congrats!

Jenny.

Hi julie,

just caught your comment. Thankyou for your kind
words, I too love the Red Breasted Robin, they
are so friendly and will come up and eat out of
your hand, if you are patient.

Glad you enjoyed this one and thankyou for reading.

Jenny.

new julie
Hello! Jenny, Well deserved cherry!
What a gem.
Loved it all, especially the Yew tree.
And the Red breasted Robin.
Beautifully written.
Faith hope and charity,and love
is all the world needs. TLC.
and marriages hug,sorry and kiss
"Little things mean a lot" song.
Bet cherry had made you feel so happy!
Misinterrpreted yesterday at a library,
hoping to read out, one of my AbcTales book
mag;23. As paper stated drop in, participate,
and many be there. say writing groups to read.
No three in charge reading chapter of new Author's
book, and I asked do bit,not ever, then part discussed. But all say six of us got frre book read
it, and pass it on. And a free tea. Not impressed,
as had magazone with me AbcTales,showed wanted see staff did, never did. I explained I am under false impression, paper reading. And fruits mentioned in book from a country,a late person mentioned and in her kitchen, told off, stop talking about kitchen, and get back to the book, that upset me, speak someone like that.They read well expression. But later ended up, talking not well ok but so many things. Time for me go,get bus for friend shre coming fitting. making my rock n roll
petticoat skirt, but as get two buses, already at terminus strange. Resting to-day. Ah!
keep smiling and writing.
julie xx

julie xx

a good read this Jenny, really enjoyed it

Thanks julie,

for your long newsy comment, hope the petticoat
skirt looks good.

Take care.
Jenny.

Hello the unfolding head,

thankyou so much for reading and letting me know
you enjoyed this poem, always appreciated.

Jenny.

Haven't been around much lately for various reasons but came for a quick look and had to stop and say what a wonderful piece this is Jenny - well done!

Coral

Hi coral,

great to hear from you again, hope you are well.

I'm really pleased you enjoyed this piece, thankyou
for reading and letting me know.

Jenny.

Jenny this definitely deserved a big fat cherry, two if that were possible. I'm not a winter person yet you've got me longing for snow:

flurries of Snow
carry fresh hope
on each flake
that falls

Beautiful!

Thanks so much maggy, glad I could give you a bit
of Winter Magic.

Really appreciate you reading and commenting.

Cheers!

Jenny.

Simply beautiful, Jenny! Well done :)

Magic xxx

Hi there Magic,

you are so kind, thankyou for the great comment.

Jenny.xxx

Jenny,

Beautiful piece! Definately deserved the cherry! Probably one of my favorite poems now! Awesome job. =))))))) And and and... I love your poems.

Savannah

Oh and ps I was able to picture the whole poem, I saw it all in my head! Like a movie or a music video!

Savannah

Hello Savannah,

you have really touched me with your kind words,
thankyou so much.

I'm really pleased you could picture the scene
and isn't the Robin such a special bird?

Thankyou for reading and the great comment.

Jenny.