Whispers came softly
amongst the daffodils,
'spring is here,'
they gently sigh,
there's a cry
on the breeze,
soon there will be
blossom on the trees,
once again winter chills
will be no more,
when spring once again
comes knocking at our door,
the spirits of nature
will come alive,
when they spy the
new buds starting to arrive.
Comments
seashore | February 28, 2011 - 13:31
Spring can't come too soon this year, Jenny. Good to read an optimistic Spring poem. Nice one.
skinner_jennifer | February 28, 2011 - 13:42
Thankyou so much for your kind comment seashore, I
know exactly what you mean, I love the spring, the
garden seems to come alive and those beautiful
daffodils are so desperate to open.
Jenny.
Highhat | February 28, 2011 - 15:23
Tomorrow is officially the first day of the Spring season. I have been waiting for ages. Thanks for setting the scene Jenny.
;)Pia
skinner_jennifer | February 28, 2011 - 16:09
Great Pia, really glad I could set the scene, I'm
glad for your sake that it's here once again.
Thankyou again for reading and commenting.
Jenny.
peter_edward | February 28, 2011 - 18:42
this is a well written poem, i like it
skinner_jennifer | February 28, 2011 - 18:56
Thankyou so much peter_edward,
what a wonderful comment, you have really cheered
me up thankyou again.
Jenny.
shoe | February 28, 2011 - 19:30
The spirits of nature, whispering softly, I love that idea, lovely poem.
skinner_jennifer | February 28, 2011 - 20:08
Hi shoe,
thankyou so much for reading and leaving that
special comment, it's very much appreciated.
Jenny.
MistakenMagic | February 28, 2011 - 22:11
A beautiful poem, Jenny. I can't wait for spring either :)
Magic xxx
sue dinum | February 28, 2011 - 22:28
Lovely poem, Jenny. Full of optimism and hopefully lots of good things to come. Well done.
sue
skinner_jennifer | March 1, 2011 - 09:47
Thankyou for reading Magic, your words are so kind.
Jenny. xxx
skinner_jennifer | March 1, 2011 - 09:51
Hi sue,
yes it's great to see the buds coming along in the
garden and the bulbs wanting to flower, what a great
time of the year spring is, thankyou for reading and
such a great comment.
Jenny.
fatboy74 | March 1, 2011 - 16:09
I agree with all this praise Jenny, you have brought it all to life in this poem. Thanks for the read. :-)
skinner_jennifer | March 1, 2011 - 16:43
Thankyou so much fatboy, spring is such a special
time especially when you have a garden, it makes
you feel good to be alive, I bet you know what I
mean.
Thankyou for reading and your great comment, always
appreciated.
Jenny.