Drifting Cloud

Drifting Cloud

I’m not seeking out the pleasure
Of the misery of the past
I can’t talk about the things
That you knew would not last

It’s all about perception
And what you couldn’t see
As you were pointing to the sky
I was at the bottom of the sea

So tell me this was unreal
Say it was all a joke
I can stomach all the humour
It’s the irony that makes me choke

I can understand your laughter
And connect the mistakes I made
I’ve just realised what you were after
was an experimental escapade

So forgive me for my cynicism
And the questions I might raise
You see I swim in the curiosity
Of the waters of faint praise

I won’t thank you for the silence
When we went walking the opposite way
I really didn’t want to find
That we had so little to say

And time will travel and not feel a thing
But I admire its sense of timing
The past can make the witness sing
As it strips the silver from the lining

And leaves me with a drifting cloud.

©sj2009

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Comments

Beeme | September 3, 2009 - 09:31

Sad to see this is under 'autobiography'Smokejack. I loved the images in this and the sense that you are moving on, little by little. Love the last lines:

'The past can make the witness sing
As it strips the silver from the lining

And leaves me with a drifting cloud.'

Great poem,

Beeme xx

smokejack | September 3, 2009 - 11:42

'the world would be a better place if the parents had to eat the sprouts'

hey beemee

my fault I keep forgetting to categorise my stuff. This poem is more about relationships in general and the reaction of people when they go wrong. I find the whole emotional trip fascinating.

Thanks for the comp too!